Question

假設(shè)你是2013年“希望英語(yǔ)”競(jìng)賽的參賽選手，組委會(huì)以“健康”為題命題演講。以下是演講要點(diǎn)：健康對(duì)我們?nèi)魏稳藖?lái)說(shuō)都是最為重要的。
首先，注意你的飲食。我們應(yīng)該吃大量的水果和蔬菜……
其次，鍛煉是必需的……
最后，養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣……
注意：1.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；  2.詞數(shù)：120左右； 3.文章開(kāi)頭已給出；不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)
Health is the most important for any of us.
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Answer 1

Health is the most important for any of us. In order to stay healthy, we need some common knowledge.
Firstly, pay attention to the diet. We should eat lots of fruit and vegetables, because they are rich in fiber and low in fat. As a proverb says, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” So fruit is good for health. Don't have a lot of food that contains too much fat, such as butter. Meanwhile, sweets should be eaten in proper quantity, because too much sugar does harm to us. Don't drink too much coffee，either.

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考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)作文
點(diǎn)評(píng)：寫(xiě)好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫(xiě)作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，寫(xiě)完后考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。