Question

假設(shè)你是2013年“希望英語(yǔ)”競(jìng)賽的參賽選手，組委會(huì)以“健康”為題命題演講。以下是演講要點(diǎn)：健康對(duì)我們?nèi)魏稳藖?lái)說(shuō)都是最為重要的。

首先，注意你的飲食。我們應(yīng)該吃大量的水果和蔬菜……

其次，鍛煉是必需的……

最后，養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣……

注意：1.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；  2.詞數(shù)：120左右； 3.文章開(kāi)頭已給出；不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)

Health is the most important for any of us.

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

Health is the most important for any of us. In order to stay healthy, we need some common knowledge. Firstly, pay attention to the diet. We should eat lots of fruit and vegetables, because they are rich in fiber and low in fat. As a proverb says, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” So fruit is good for health. Don’t have a lot of food that contains too much fat, such as butter. Meanwhile , sweets should be eaten in proper quantity, because too much sugar does harm to us. Don’t drink too much coffee, either.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話(huà)題類(lèi)作文。假設(shè)你是2013年“希望英語(yǔ)”競(jìng)賽的參賽選手，組委會(huì)以“健康”為題命題演講。以下是演講要點(diǎn)：健康對(duì)我們?nèi)魏稳藖?lái)說(shuō)都是最為重要的。首先，注意你的飲食。我們應(yīng)該吃大量的水果和蔬菜……其次，鍛煉是必需的……最后，養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣……需要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實(shí)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型為文章潤(rùn)色。注意要求的詞數(shù)120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】As a proverb says, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.”這句諺語(yǔ)用的恰到好處。Don’t have a lot of food that contains too much fat, such as butter.這個(gè)句子中包含一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句。

考點(diǎn)：話(huà)題類(lèi)書(shū)面表達(dá)