Question

7．現(xiàn)在，人口老齡化成了一個突出的社會問題．假定你是李華，你從報紙上看到一則關(guān)于社區(qū)招募暑期照顧老人的志愿者的廣告．你對此項工作非常感興趣，希望得到這份工作．請用英語給社區(qū)負責人寫一封求職信，信的內(nèi)容包括以下幾個方面：1．對這份工作的認識（如對本人及對社會的益處等）；
2．個人優(yōu)勢（如性格、照顧別人的能力等）；
3．你的計劃（如怎樣照顧老人）．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：100字左右．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入詞數(shù)；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名及學校等信息．
Dear Sir/Madam，
I have read your advertisement in the newspaper andI am writing to apply for the job．
I know the old people have devoted themselves to our society．So it's our duty to look after them well，through which we can get a good chance to understand our society and ourselves．The job can also help me know how to get on well with the old people．
I'm a student of a senior high school．I am easy-going and I am careful with everything I do，especially looking after others．My friends all think highly of me for that．
First of all，if I am employed，I'll make efforts to build a happy and relaxing relation with them．Then I'll pay more attention to their diet and physical exercise．What's more，I know how to give first aid in case an emergency happens．
I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封求職信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一表明書信目的；二對這份工作的認識；三個人優(yōu)勢；四自己如何照顧老人的計劃．
高分句型：
1．So it's our duty to look after them well，through which we can get a good chance to understand our society and ourselves句子里it是形式主語，代指動詞不定式 to look after them well； which 引導非限制性定語從句，代指to look after them well；get a good chance to 表示"有做某事的好機會"．
照顧好他們是我們的責任，通過這個工作我們能有一個理解我們的社會和我們自身的好機會．
2．What's more，I know how to give first aid in case an emergency happens．句子里What's more表示"此外"；first aid 表示"急救"；in case 引導條件狀語從句，表示"以免，以防"．
此外，我知道如果發(fā)生緊急情況怎樣做急救．

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
    I have read your advertisement in the newspaper and I am writing to apply for the job．（表明書信目的）
    I know the old people have devoted themselves to our society．So it's our duty to look after them well，through which we can get a good chance to understand our society and ourselves．【高分句型一】The job can also help me know how to get on well with the old people．（對這份工作的認識）I'm a student of a senior high school．I am easy-going and I am careful with everything I do，especially looking after others．My friends all think highly of me for that．（個人優(yōu)勢）First of all，if I am employed，I'll make efforts to build a happy and relaxing relation with them．Then I'll pay more attention to their diet and physical exercise．What's more，I know how to give first aid in case an emergency happens．【高分句型二】（自己如何照顧老人的計劃）
    I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點評 考查提綱類作文．
提綱類作文給出的要點，我們要根據(jù)要點選詞組句，然后按照篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連句成篇．在這一過程中要注意選擇恰當?shù)谋硎静⒘�、遞進、因果或轉(zhuǎn)折意義的過渡詞，把所有要點、句子連接起來，使句與句意思連貫，結(jié)構(gòu)銜接，力求準確生動、條理清楚．