Question

請(qǐng)結(jié)合材料，按要求用英文寫(xiě)作。
A report shows that China has over 300 million smokers，the highest in the world，with the rate of teenage smokers increasing every year．
要求：1．就此材料發(fā)表你的看法；
2．緊扣材料，有明確的觀(guān)點(diǎn)；
3．詞數(shù)不少于60；
4．在答題卡上作答。
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Answer 1

One possible version：
According to a report, China has the largest number of smoker in the world, with more and more teenagers joining the ranks every year.
The problem has aroused great pubic concern, since smoking is responsible for thousands of premature deaths every year caused by smoking-related diseases. It affects the health of smokers, and meanwhile threatens non-smokers by exposing them to secondhand smoke. Therefore, awareness should be raised about the risks of smoking, and a nationwide ban should be issued on smoking in public places. It is hoped that through these measures, fewer people will fall victim to cigarettes, and more will be able to embrace a healthy life free of smoke.

試題分析：本文是一篇材料作文，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)該先用一句話(huà)來(lái)總結(jié)材料內(nèi)容，即中國(guó)是世界上吸煙最多的國(guó)家，而且青少年吸煙的人數(shù)也在增加。然后就材料發(fā)表看法時(shí)應(yīng)該先提出吸煙的危害the harm of smoking ,可以使用的短語(yǔ)do harm to ,be harmful to ,ruin one’s health 等。接下來(lái)要表達(dá)作者自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)，也就是要戒煙，改掉吸煙的壞習(xí)慣，可以使用的短語(yǔ)kick the habit of 、quit smoking 等。因?yàn)楸疚氖潜磉_(dá)現(xiàn)狀，所以在寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。為了使句子或段落語(yǔ)義連貫，表達(dá)合理準(zhǔn)確，可以適當(dāng)加入一些連接詞語(yǔ)。如表達(dá)轉(zhuǎn)折的but, however, otherwise等，表達(dá)的遞進(jìn)besides, what’s more等，表達(dá)因果so ,therefore, as a result等，有時(shí)還需要加入一些必要的過(guò)渡句子以達(dá)到承上啟下的效果。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文短小精悍，層次分明。作者首先用一個(gè)含有with 復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)的句子來(lái)概述材料內(nèi)容，然后提出了自己對(duì)吸煙的反對(duì)，觀(guān)點(diǎn)明確，達(dá)到了文章的要求。在文中作者使用了幾個(gè)長(zhǎng)句（并列句、復(fù)合句、復(fù)雜句、復(fù)合復(fù)雜句）和短句來(lái)表述文章的內(nèi)容，這種長(zhǎng)短句的結(jié)合有效地表達(dá)了豐富的信息。在文中用了到了原因狀語(yǔ)從句since smoking is responsible for thousands of premature deaths every year caused by smoking-related diseases，主語(yǔ)從句It is hoped that through these measures, fewer people will fall victim to cigarettes, and more will be able to embrace a healthy life free of smoke.，這些都顯示了作者深厚的語(yǔ)言功底和對(duì)語(yǔ)言較強(qiáng)的把控力。