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3．根據(jù)以下提示，請以“How to keep healthy”為題寫一篇短文，從良好的生活習(xí)慣，適當(dāng)?shù)捏w育鍛煉及健康的飲食習(xí)慣等方面，為那些生活習(xí)慣欠佳、缺乏鍛煉的朋友提出良好的建議（要求意思連貫、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，詞數(shù)為80詞左右）
參考詞匯：熬夜（stay up）、垃圾食品（junk food）、挑剔（be particular about）、定時定量（have meals regularly）
How to keep healthy
　　Health is very important for everybody．Then how can we do to keep healthy？You can try the following tips：
（良好的生活習(xí)慣和飲食習(xí)慣）First，you should have healthy life and eating habits．You shouldn’t stay up．You should eat more vegetables and fruit．Don’t eat junk food．You'd better have meals regularly．Don’t drink coffee too much，it’s bad for you．
（體育鍛煉）Second，you can play sports．Sports can make you stronger and healthier．You can play baketball with your friends when you are free．You can go to the mouuntains with your family．
（愉快的心情）Third，Be happy．A happy man lives longer than a sad man．So sing a song or watch a fun movie．You can do anything to mak e you happy．
（其他建議）At last，stay away from smoking and drinking．Smoking and drinking are too bad for men．They can cause terrible illness．
If you do these things，I believe you can be a healthy man．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇話題作文．本文所給內(nèi)容比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語從良好的生活習(xí)慣，適當(dāng)?shù)捏w育鍛煉及健康的飲食習(xí)慣等方面以How to keep healthy為那些生活習(xí)慣欠佳、缺乏鍛煉的朋友提出良好的建議．動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)；由于是給別人提出建議，給出自己的觀點，所以人稱主要為第二人稱you．注意說話的語氣及主謂一致問題．寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，可用短語first，second，third，at last，should，You’d better等．

解答 答案：
　　　　　How to keep healthy
　　Health is very important for everybody．Then how can we do to keep healthy？You can try the following tips：
（良好的生活習(xí)慣和飲食習(xí)慣）First，you should have healthy life and eating habits．You shouldn’t stay up．You should eat more vegetables and fruit．Don’t eat junk food．You'd better have meals regularly．Don’t drink coffee too much，it’s bad for you．
（體育鍛煉）Second，you can play sports．Sports can make you stronger and healthier．You can play baketball with your friends when you are free．You can go to the mouuntains with your family．
（愉快的心情）Third，Be happy．A happy man lives longer than a sad man．So sing a song or watch a fun movie．You can do anything to mak e you happy．
（其他建議）At last，stay away from smoking and drinking．Smoking and drinking are too bad for men．They can cause terrible illness．
If you do these things，I believe you can be a healthy man．

點評 在寫作中要注意層次緊湊，開始有總說，最后一段總結(jié)，中間分要點分別說明題中給出的要點．用first，second，third，at last顯得層次鮮明，邏輯性很強(qiáng)．因為文章是提出建議，所以我們要用許多委婉的表達(dá)來給別人提出建議，如should，You’d better等．注意不要出現(xiàn)語法，詞匯等的錯誤，不要出現(xiàn)漢語式的英語．