Question

15．假如你叫李明，最近你和你父母就”周末學(xué)生該不該與同學(xué)外出活動(dòng)”進(jìn)行了討論．
現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你以Should teenagers go out with their friends on weekends？為題，參照表內(nèi)所提供的信息，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文．

Your parents’ideas	Your ideas
1．go over lessons	1．-----
2．have a good sleep	2．-----
3．help parents do housework	3．-----

注意：=1．開(kāi)頭部分已寫(xiě)好，你只需接著寫(xiě)．
=2．所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括表格中他們的想法和你的至少三個(gè)想法．
=3．詞數(shù)：70個(gè)左右．
Should teenagers go out with their friends on weekends？Recently I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether teenagers should go out with their friends on weekends（父母的想法）My parents think that teenagers should stay at home to go over their lessons．And they should have enough time to have a good sleep．In the meanwhile，they should help their parents do some housework．
（我的三個(gè)想法）In my opinion，we teenagers should go out with our friends for fun so that we can relax more．And we can also share ideas with each other．What’s more，we can also take some exercise together to keep fit．．

Answer 1

分析 本題目是寫(xiě)有關(guān)陳述觀點(diǎn)的一篇短文．觀點(diǎn)要明確，分條目列舉出來(lái)，本文的要點(diǎn)有1，父母的建議，2，作者的建議，時(shí)態(tài)主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來(lái)寫(xiě)．注意人稱(chēng)的運(yùn)用．主要用第一人稱(chēng)，利用一些常見(jiàn)的句型去寫(xiě)簡(jiǎn)短的句子．重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)句型有We/They should…；In my opinion，…think that；sometimes等等．

解答 答案：Should teenagers go out with their friends on weekends？
Recently I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether teenagers should go out with their friends on weekends．（父母的想法）My parents think that teenagers should stay at home to go over their lessons．And they should have enough time to have a good sleep．In the meanwhile，they should help their parents do some housework．
  （我的三個(gè)想法） In my opinion，we teenagers should go out with our friends for fun so that we can relax more．And we can also share ideas with each other．What’s more，we can also take some exercise together to keep fit．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給材料作文，本文人稱(chēng)問(wèn)題比較復(fù)雜，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問(wèn)題比較少．動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫(xiě)出關(guān)鍵單詞．寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．