請修改下面的短文。短文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及單詞的增加，刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1，每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2，只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。
Many times when I was at a bad mood I shouted at the people around me. I
scream, shouted and ran as fast as I could relieve my pressure. So it was useless,
since I still had to return to the problem. This term I begin to change. I have realized
however greater the difficulty is, I have to face with it. It’s no use screaming and
shouting at others. Beside, there are teachers and friends around me who are ready to
helping me. As long as I try my best, I can make a progress in any aspect. Now I feel
every day is a pleasant day and the sun is always shining bright on my face.

請修改下面的短文。短文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1，每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2，只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。

Many times when I was at a bad mood I shouted at the people around me. I scream, shouted and ran as fast as I could relieve my pressure. So it was useless,since I still had to return to the problem. This term I begin to change. I have realized however greater the difficulty is, I have to face with it. It’s no use screaming andshouting at others. Beside, there are teachers and friends around me who are ready tohelping me. As long as I try my best, I can make a progress in any aspect. Now I feel every day is a pleasant day and the sun is always shining bright on my face.

請修改下面的短文。短文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1，每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2，只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。

Many times when I was at a bad mood I shouted at the people around me. I

scream, shouted and ran as fast as I could relieve my pressure. So it was useless,

since I still had to return to the problem. This term I begin to change. I have realized

however greater the difficulty is, I have to face with it. It’s no use screaming and

shouting at others. Beside, there are teachers and friends around me who are ready to

helping me. As long as I try my best, I can make a progress in any aspect. Now I feel

every day is a pleasant day and the sun is always shining bright on my face.

文中共有10處語言錯誤。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加上一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。

It is important to know that a parent can do to help reduce children’s stress.

 If you notice that your child is becoming nerve, he may have problems at the

school. He may has trouble sleep. He may be depressing and begin to suffer

 from headaches. You should talk him to try to discover the cause of her stress.

You can spend extra time help him. In short, you need to be complete

supportive and encouraging all the time.

文中共有10處語言錯誤。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
v 增加：在缺詞處加上一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
v 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
v 修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
v 注意： 1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to thank you with your kind help. Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in English. My pronunciation was terribly : I could only speak a few words. But one and a half yeas later, I now think English fun to learn. I got a lot of from your encouraging words. I will always remember what you said, “ If you try to , you can be No.1 !” I hope you’ve had pleasant journey home and will come to China again sometimes in the future. I will write again and send you the photos we take together.