Question

英語課上,老師要求同桌同學(xué)相互修改作文。假設(shè)以下小作文為你同桌所寫，請你對其進(jìn)行修改。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（^），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
3．必須按答題要求做題，否則不給分。
My grandmother is a village woman. She is already in her seventy. Although she received little school education, but she is aware that knowledge is of great important to young people. When my father was young, my grandmother took good care him so that my father could cost more time on his studies. Now, she often encouraged me to study hard. This summer she was bad ill in bed. When I visited her during the summer holiday, I found her sitting in bed, made new shoes for me! I was so deeply moving that tears came to my eyes. So is my grandmother, a kind and hardworking woman. I’ll respect and love her forever.

Answer 1

【小題1】seventy →seventies                                             
【小題2】去but 
【小題3】important→ importance 
【小題4】took good care后 加of   
【小題5】cost→ spend
【小題6】encouraged→ encourages
【小題7】bad →badly 
【小題8】made →making
【小題9】moving→ moved
【小題10】So→ such

解析試題分析：我的祖母是一個七十多歲的農(nóng)村婦女。盡管她沒受過很多教育，但是她卻知道知識對年輕人非常重要，當(dāng)我父親小的時候她就盡心照顧他為了讓他能夠有更多時間學(xué)習(xí)，而現(xiàn)在奶奶也經(jīng)常鼓勵我去學(xué)習(xí)，她為我們做的一切使我們對她更為敬重。
【小題1】考查數(shù)詞。She is already in her seventy. 固定短語：在某人幾十歲的時候“in one’s +幾十的復(fù)數(shù)形式”，故把seventy改為seventies。                                          
【小題2】考查連詞。but she is aware。在主從復(fù)合句中，although不和but同時出現(xiàn)，故去but。
【小題3】考查名詞。knowledge is of great important 。介詞后跟名詞做賓語，故把important改為importance，of+抽象名詞等于形容詞。
【小題4】考查固定短語。my grandmother took good care him。固定短語：take care of“照顧”，所以在him前加of。
【小題5】考查動詞用法。my father could cost more time on his studies. 動詞cost的主語需是物，短語spend time on sth“花費(fèi)時間做某事” ，把cost改為spend。
【小題6】考查動詞時態(tài)。she often encouraged me to study hard. 根據(jù)句中now可知此處指的是現(xiàn)在的情況，用一般現(xiàn)在時，故把encouraged改為encourages 。
【小題7】考查副詞。 she was bad ill 。修飾形容詞ill需用副詞，把bad改為badly。
【小題8】考查非謂語動詞。made new shoes for me!從結(jié)構(gòu)可知此處是非謂語做伴隨狀語，make和句子主語是主動關(guān)系，故把made改為 making 。
【小題9】考查語態(tài)。I was so deeply moving。根據(jù)句意可知此處是被動意思，故把moving改為 moved。意思：我被深深地打動了。
【小題10】考查代詞。So is my grandmother。 在倒裝句中such可以放句首，意思是“如此，這樣”，而so后面必須有被修飾的形容詞或副詞，故把So 改為Such。
考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯。