Question

19．此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤．對(duì)標(biāo)題號(hào)的每一行做出判斷：如無(wú)錯(cuò)誤，在該行右邊的橫線上劃（√）；如有錯(cuò)誤（每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤），則按下列情況改正：
此行多一個(gè)詞：把多余的詞用斜線劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉．
此行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞．
此行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞．
注意：原行沒(méi)有錯(cuò)的不要改．
I'd love to tell you something about my vacation．I've been（76）√looking forward to visit the East Lake for a long time，（77）visitingYesterday，with my friends，I paid a visit it．We set off at（78）to7：00 am by bus．It is 8 kilometers far away from our city，and（79）去掉farwhen we got there，it was 7：20 am．There we have a wonderful （80）hadtime．We spent the whole morning boating sand fished on the lake．（81）finishingThen we had a picnic by the lake．On the afternoon，we climbed（82）Inthe Snake Island，picking the beautiful flowers and took a lot of pictures（83）picked Time passed very quick．Before we knew it，it was already 16：00，（84）quicklybut we had to go back．How about your vacation？Please write to（85）andme as soon as possible．

Answer 1

分析 短文講述了作者在假期的一次旅行．作者與朋友們一起去了距離市區(qū)8公里的東湖，他們花了一上午的時(shí)間劃船，釣魚(yú)，還在湖邊進(jìn)行野餐；下午他們爬了蛇島在蛇島上摘花，拍照，一直到了下午四點(diǎn)多才返回．作者和朋友們度過(guò)了愉快的一天．

解答 I'd love to tell you something about my vacation．I've been （76）√
looking forward to visit the East Lake for a long time，（77）visiting
Yesterday，with my friends，I paid a visit∧it．We set off at    （78）to
7：00 am by bus．It is 8 kilometers far away from our city，and   （79）去掉far
when we got there，it was 7：20 am．There we have a wonderful   （80）had
time．We spent the whole morning boatings and fishedon the lake．  （81）finishing
Then we had a picnic by the lake．On the afternoon，we climbed   （82）In
the Snake Island，picking the beautiful flowers and took a lot of pictures   （83）picked 
 Time passed very quick．Before we knew it，it was already 16：00，（84）quickly
but we had to go back．How about your vacation？Please write to   （85）and
me as soon as possible．
76．√
77．visit改為visiting；考查固定短語(yǔ)搭配，look forward to中to是介詞，后面跟名詞或動(dòng)名詞．
78．visit后面加to；考查固定短語(yǔ)搭配，pay a visit to后接地點(diǎn)，表示"去某地參觀，旅游"．
79．去掉far；考查固定搭配，It is 8 kilometers away from our city意為"它距離我們的城市8公里遠(yuǎn)"，當(dāng)away前面有具體的數(shù)字時(shí)，要去掉far．
80．have改為had；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，短文講的是假期發(fā)生的事情，所以要用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)．
81．finished改為finishing；考查并列結(jié)構(gòu)，用finishing和and前面的boating構(gòu)成并列結(jié)構(gòu)，在句中作狀語(yǔ)．
82．On改為In；考查介詞，"在下午"要用"in the afternoon"，這是固定用法．
83．picking改為picked；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，這里用picked和前面的climbed以及后面的took構(gòu)成并列結(jié)構(gòu)，并列作句子的謂語(yǔ)．
84．quick改為quickly；考查副詞，句中需要修飾的是動(dòng)詞passed，所以要用副詞形式．
85．but改為and；考查連詞，結(jié)合上下文句意，這里應(yīng)當(dāng)是并列關(guān)系而不是轉(zhuǎn)折，故用and．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 在短文改錯(cuò)當(dāng)中，首先要從整體掌握短文大意，結(jié)合上下文語(yǔ)境并充分運(yùn)用平時(shí)掌握的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，充分運(yùn)用所學(xué)的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，包括一些實(shí)詞和虛詞的用法，固定短語(yǔ)搭配，習(xí)慣性用法，結(jié)合上下文整體關(guān)系，找出錯(cuò)誤并加以修正．