Question

假定你是中學(xué)生梨花。在一位名叫Tiger Tom的學(xué)生家長(zhǎng)的博客上，你看到如下內(nèi)容。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)博客內(nèi)容、寫作要點(diǎn)和寫作要求，給這位家長(zhǎng)回復(fù)。
I’m the mother of a fourteen-year-old. I have a rule for my daughter: be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong?
寫作要點(diǎn)：
1. 表明自己的看法；2. 陳述自己的理由（可以舉例說(shuō)明）；3. 提出至少兩條建議。
寫作要求：
1. 短文次數(shù)不少于150（不含已經(jīng)寫好的部分）；
2. 內(nèi)容充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)意連貫；
3. 書寫必須干凈、清晰、工整。
Hi, Tiger Mom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is _______
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Answer 1

Hi, Tiger Mom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and their future university admission, development in wisdom, emotion, health, and life attitude never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice. More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do.

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