Question

　　假定你的名字叫李華，住在北京東長安街233號。

　　今年6月美國青年學(xué)生Jack Cooper隨青年訪華團(tuán)訪問北京，最后一天在青年宮舉行告別會（farewell party）。你參加了，坐在Jack Cooper旁邊，散會時你和他互相拿錯了對方的筆記本。事后你翻看筆記本，發(fā)現(xiàn)他的名字地址，才知道拿錯了�，F(xiàn)在你把筆記本寄回去給他，寫一封簡明的信說明，同時請他把你的筆記本按你所給的地址寄給你。

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One possible version： 　　233 Dong Changan Street Beijing, China July 7, 2004 Dear Jack, 　　In June when you were visiting Beijing, on the last of your trip a farewell party was given at Youth Palace． At the party I sat next to you． Then at the end when we went away we took each other's notebook by mistake． I discovered this only afterwards when I looked into the notebook and found your name and address inside． I am now sending your notebook by posting to you． Will you please send my notebook to me at the address which is given above? Thank you very much． 　　I hope you will visit Beijing again soon． Your Chinese friend, Li Hua

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建議使用句型： 　　　A farewell party was given． 　　　I sat next to 　　　Will you please send ．．． 建議使用動詞： 　　　take ．．． by mistake, look into the notebook and found．．． 寫作技巧提示： 　　高考英語書面表達(dá)新的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)提出`語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面雖有面雖有些許錯誤,但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞匯所致; 具有較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力'。此點(diǎn)應(yīng)引起考生的極大關(guān)注。現(xiàn)舉實(shí)例如下, [ ]部分為核心部分： ① I [was walking] along Park Road towards the east [when] an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street．　　 　　句式： be doing something when ．．． 正在做某事就在這時．．． 　　表達(dá)法： make a right turn　朝右轉(zhuǎn)彎　　 ② The car didn't stop but [drove off] at great speed [heading west]． 　　表達(dá)法： drive off heading west 高速向西開去 ③ On the other side, [where the playground used to be] now [stands another new building- our library]． 　　→該句含一個由where引導(dǎo)的非限定性的定語從句, 在此處插入, 令人感到自然、 得體, 其中還使用了表達(dá)法`used to be', 準(zhǔn)確、地道。該句的后半部由一個倒裝句組成, 在對主語作進(jìn)一步說明時, 使用了破折號, 語言既利落, 結(jié)構(gòu)又緊湊。 ④ After a short rest, we [had great fun singing] and dancing, telling jokes or stories． 　　句式： have fun (in) doing sth ⑤ The time passed quickly． [Before] we knew it, we had to say goodbye to the workers． 　　→使用before譯成："還未來得及．．．, 就"。 ⑥ My brother was riding [with] me sitting on the seat [behind]． 　　→該句使用with結(jié)構(gòu), 其結(jié)構(gòu)為[with + 賓語 + 賓語補(bǔ)足語]。 　　該結(jié)構(gòu)的情景描述功能十分突出。此外, behind一詞用作seat定語的用法也十分輕巧。 ⑦ There is [sure] to be a lot of fun．　　　　 　　→ 在There is句式中加入be sure to等表達(dá)是十分有用的寫作技巧, 又如： 　　There happened to be．．．　　There seems to be ．．．