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下面的餅狀圖顯示了某校對(duì)學(xué)生學(xué)業(yè)成績(jī)?cè)u(píng)價(jià)的新體制，圖表所示①—⑤項(xiàng)全面構(gòu)成了一個(gè)學(xué)生的學(xué)業(yè)成績(jī)。假如你是該校學(xué)生，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列圖示，以“The New Grading System in Our School”為題用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：

1．簡(jiǎn)要描述圖中信息；
2．談?wù)勀銓?duì)這一新舉措的看法并說(shuō)明原因。
注意：詞數(shù): 100—120，文章的題目和開(kāi)頭已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）；
圖表說(shuō)明：①    test results
②    notes
③    homework
④    class performances
⑤    teamwork
The New Grading System in Our School
In order to help students develop their abilities in all fields, our school now has asked the teachers to make some changes in the grading system. This chart shows how it works.
                                                                            
                                                                           

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One possible version:  
The New Grading System in Our School
In order to help students develop their abilities in all fields, our school now has asked the teachers to make some changes in the grading system. This chart shows how it works.
Students’ test results, which used to be the only way to evaluate a student in school, make up only 30% of his final score. Instead, how a student performs in class, and how he takes notes and does his homework are also taken into account, each part of which makes up 20%. Besides, teamwork in class is also important. If you want a higher score, you should be good at working together with your classmates.
I’m all for the new grading system, which evaluates us students in all fields. By doing so, we students can fully develop our abilities as well as potential on our way to adulthood and can truly make preparations for our future life.

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