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11．此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤．對(duì)標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每一行作出判斷：如無錯(cuò)誤，則在該行右邊橫線上畫出一個(gè)勾（√）；如有錯(cuò)誤（每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤），則按下列情況改正：此行多一個(gè)詞：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉，在此行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉；此行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（　�。�，在此行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞；該行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞．注意：原行沒有錯(cuò)的不要改．
The Grand Canal is the longest canal in the world．It                     76．√
runs from Beijing to Hangzhou，by a distance of nearly                 77．by改為with
1，800 kilometres．Most rivers in China run from．western to       78．western改為west
east，so the ancient rulers found necessary to dig a canal             79．加it
that run from the south to the north．In the year 605  AD，80．run改為ran
Emperor Yang Guang ordered the canal to be dug．Dig such          81．Dig改為Digging
a long canal was very difficult．3.6 million of people worked          82．of去掉
on them and in less than a year over half of them lost their             83．them改為it
lives．Before the construction was completed，the Grand              84．Before改為Since
Canal has been playing an important roles in transport．                85．roles改為role．

Answer 1

分析 大運(yùn)河是世界上最長的運(yùn)河．它從北京延伸到杭州，距離近一千八百公里．中國絕大多數(shù)河流都是自西向東的，因此古代的統(tǒng)治者認(rèn)為挖一條從南到北的運(yùn)河很有必要．公元605年，隋煬帝楊廣命令開鑿運(yùn)河，因?yàn)楣こ唐D巨，參與勞動(dòng)的三百六十萬人在不到一年的時(shí)間里，有一半人喪命．從工程結(jié)束，大運(yùn)河一直都在運(yùn)輸中發(fā)揮重要作用．

解答 The Grand Canal is the longest canal in the world．It     
    
runs from Beijing to Hangzhou，by a distance of nearly     
                                               with
1，800 kilometres．Most rivers in China run from western to   
                                                                            west
east，so the ancient rulers found∧necessary to dig a canal    
                                              加it
that run from the south to the north．In the year 605  AD，
       ran
Emperor Yang Guang ordered the canal to be dug．Dig such  
                                                                       Digging 
a long canal was very difficult．3.6 million of people worked 
                                                              去掉
on them and in less than a year over half of them lost their  
      it
lives．Before the construction was completed，the Grand    
          Since
Canal has been playing an important roles in transport．
                                                     role
1．正確．
2．by改為with．題干表達(dá)的是事物具備的特征，要用with短語來表示．
3．western改為west．句中west是作介詞from的賓語，要用名詞形式．
4．加it．形式賓語，真正的賓語是后面的動(dòng)詞不定式．
5．run改為ran．句意表達(dá)的是過去，要用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)．
6．Dig改為Digging．題干中dig such a long canal是作主語的，要用動(dòng)名詞．
7．of去掉．和具體數(shù)字連用的量詞不能和of短語連用．
8．them改為it．邏輯指代錯(cuò)誤，句意指代的是大運(yùn)河，要用it來指代．
9．Before改為Since．句意表達(dá)的是從…時(shí)候開始．
10．roles改為role．短語搭配，play an important role起重要作用．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．�？嫉闹�識(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．