Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。
With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the Internet has become a common place in our life. Here consumers can buy almost everything they need.
Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience. People don’t have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like. This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person. The goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet. The commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly.
However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages. The first disadvantage is that the consumers can’t see the goods or try them on personally. Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer. The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered. They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you. Once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.
1. 以約30個(gè)詞概括短文的要點(diǎn);
2. 然后以約120個(gè)詞以”網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物”為主題發(fā)表看法,并包括以下要點(diǎn):
(1) 你認(rèn)為網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的最大優(yōu)點(diǎn)是什么;
(2) 描述你或你的朋友或同學(xué)網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的體驗(yàn);
(3) 你對(duì)網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物有什么建議.
1. 可以使用事例或其他論述方法支持你的觀點(diǎn), 也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不能直接引用原文中的句子;
2. 標(biāo)題自擬.

Answer 1

One possible version:
Shopping on the Internet
The passage talks about the advantages and disadvantages of shopping on the Internet. Though it has some weaknesses, it is becoming more and more popular.
I think the strongest point of shopping on the Internet is the convenience. We don’t have to search from shops to shops to look for the things we want, which saves a lot of time and energy. Some of my friends enjoy it very much and often buy some books, CDs and clothes on the Internet. I haven’t done much shopping on the Internet. The only thing I have bought on the Internet is a beautiful backpack, which I really like and it cost me 25 yuan.
However, we must be careful not to be cheated when shopping on the Internet. First, we should read the ads very carefully. Secondly, don’t believe everything they say in the advertisements and try to compare the prices more. What’s more important, we’d better choose those famous companies.

解析試題分析：本文的關(guān)鍵在于審題，首先要描述文章的要點(diǎn)，即網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物的優(yōu)勢(shì)和劣勢(shì)。以及寫作網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物的越來(lái)越受歡迎的趨勢(shì)。實(shí)際上本文屬于議論文，要闡述你所認(rèn)為的網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物的最大的優(yōu)勢(shì)—便利，便宜。同時(shí)也要客觀地描述網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物的劣勢(shì)—安全性不高。再細(xì)致地描述你自己的一次網(wǎng)購(gòu)的體驗(yàn)，同時(shí)提出自己的網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物的建議要仔細(xì)甄別。
考點(diǎn)：考查議論文的寫作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：審題時(shí)一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。