9.假定你是李華,你的美國(guó)朋友Jack因爸爸過(guò)度飲酒而感到非?鄲溃痛苏(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一封郵件.主要內(nèi)容包括:1.表示安慰;2.給出建議;3.寄予希望.注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文流暢;3.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù).
Dear Jack,
I'm sorry to hear that your father is addicted to drinking.I can understand how you feel.It must be a big problem for your family,and it may disturb your daily life.(高分句型一)As his son,it's normal for you to give him your concern.However,you shouldn't become upset about it.Certainly,you should try your best in your spare time to help him get rid of drinking little by little.(高分句型二)Meanwhile,you can ask some doctors and experts for more professional help.Making some rules for him to follow is another way you can try.
We know quitting drinking is very difficult,so you should give him time and care.I wish your father could give up drinking with your help and become healthier and happier.(高分句型三)       
Best wishes.I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文,根據(jù)提示信息你的美國(guó)朋友Jack因爸爸過(guò)度飲酒而感到非?鄲溃痛苏(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一封郵件,寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn):表示安慰;給出建議;寄予希望 2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě).本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài);就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):is addicted to對(duì)…上癮;However然而;Certainly確實(shí);in your spare time在空閑時(shí)間;get rid of祛除,擺脫;Meanwhile同時(shí);give up放棄;look forward to盼望;
It must be a big problem for your family,and it may disturb your daily life.(高分句型一)
Certainly,you should try your best in your spare time to help him get rid of drinking little by little.(高分句型二)
I wish your father could give up drinking with your help and become healthier and happier.(高分句型三)

解答 Dear Jack,
      I'm sorry to hear that your father is addicted to drinking.I can understand how you feel.It must be a big problem for your family,and it may disturb your daily life.(高分句型一)As his son,it's normal for you to give him your concern.However,you shouldn't become upset about it.Certainly,you should try your best in your spare time to help him get rid of drinking little by little.(高分句型二)Meanwhile,you can ask some doctors and experts for more professional help.Making some rules for him to follow is another way you can try.
      We know quitting drinking is very difficult,so you should give him time and care.I wish your father could give up drinking with your help and become healthier and happier.(高分句型三)
      Best wishes.I'm looking forward to your reply.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Yours,
                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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