Question

高三學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)繁重。體育課已成為他們難得的放松時(shí)間，可目前你校體育課內(nèi)容單一, 有時(shí)甚至被占用。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文, 給校報(bào)投稿, 談?wù)勀銓?duì)此現(xiàn)象的看法,并提出一些合理的建議。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右；
2. 文中需要包含提示內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使行文連貫。
Dear editor,
As the college entrance examination is drawing near, we senior high school students are occupied with busy work. _______________________________________________________
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Yours Sincerely
Li Hua

Answer 1

As the college entrance examination is drawing near, we senior high school students are occupied with busy work. To a certain extent, PE class is our only chance to relax and enjoy ourselves at school. However, it is a pity that our present PE class is quite dull and sometimes even replaced by other subjects.
Not only can PE class build our body but also can shape our personality. It serves to develop our awareness of cooperation and spirit of competition. Therefore, personally I hold the view that it would be a great loss to us students if it were replaced by other lessons. Meanwhile, I think the teacher can design and organize some fun sports besides dull field and track practice or ball games, where everyone can be involved and have fun as well. After all, not everybody thinks running, jumping or ball games appealing.
I hope PE class can not only enrich our school life but also enable everyone to find his or her own pleasure in it.

試題分析：這是半開(kāi)放性作文，給出了一個(gè)話(huà)題，關(guān)于體育課內(nèi)容單一, 有時(shí)甚至被占用的問(wèn)題，并有部分的文字提示。要求談?wù)勀銓?duì)此現(xiàn)象的看法,并提出一些合理的建議。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所給范文的一大亮點(diǎn)是句式多變： To a certain extent, PE class is our only chance to relax and enjoy ourselves at school. 這句話(huà)用了不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)，However, it is a pity that our present PE class is quite dull and sometimes even replaced by other subjects.這句話(huà)用了it做形式主語(yǔ)， Not only can PE class build our body but also can shape our personality. 這句話(huà)用了倒裝句， Therefore, personally I hold the view that it would be a great loss to us students if it were replaced by other lessons. 這句話(huà)用了同位語(yǔ)從句，Meanwhile, I think the teacher can design and organize some fun sports besides dull field and track practice or ball games, where everyone can be involved and have fun as well. 這句話(huà)用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。