Question

現(xiàn)在,學(xué)生的零花錢越來越多,但是亂花錢現(xiàn)象很嚴(yán)重。下面是你應(yīng)某晚報(bào)教育在線欄目之約針對(duì)學(xué)生的零用錢(pocket money)的消費(fèi)方向,對(duì)你市某中學(xué)的高中和初中的部分學(xué)生進(jìn)行問卷調(diào)查所得出數(shù)據(jù)。請(qǐng)你用英文寫一篇調(diào)查報(bào)告,反映調(diào)查結(jié)果,并呼吁中學(xué)生應(yīng)樹立正確的消費(fèi)觀。

注意:1、書信中不必一一列舉具體數(shù)字，只要抓住主要問題和數(shù)據(jù)說明的問題即可;

　　 2、開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3、詞數(shù)120左右。

Dear Editor,

Recently a survey has been carried out to find out how middle school students spend their pocket money.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

Recently a survey has been carried out to find out how middle school students spend their pocket money.

In this survey, both junior students and senior students spend most their money on books , snacks and playing games , still some money goes to clothes , banks , sports , and so on. The survey shows that about 44% of seniors prefer books to snacks (37% )and playing games (31% ). On the other hand, only 32% of juniors spend their pocket money buying books, while over a half buy snacks and 44% spend in playing games. Both seniors and juniors would not waste too much money on clothes or put it in banks.

I think a lot of snacks will not only make us put on weight but also do harm to our health. In addition , if we play games without limit, we ' 11 lose much precious time , which results in low grades. Furthermore, the money is hard-earned. I hope we students value our money as well as our time.

【解析】

試題分析：考查看圖作文。本文討論的話題為：學(xué)生的零用錢(pocket money)的消費(fèi)方向；從表格中考生要仔細(xì)篩選出要點(diǎn)，首先要描寫零用錢究竟花在什么地方。并詳細(xì)說明變化的趨勢(shì)和初高中學(xué)生使用零花錢的差異。表達(dá)清楚圖畫中的信息外，考生還需要根據(jù)詞數(shù)要求，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象，從而使文章的敘述不單調(diào)。

考點(diǎn)：考查看圖作文寫作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：圖表類作文對(duì)于考生的要求很高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的審題能力，能根據(jù)圖表在腦海里勾勒出故事發(fā)生的始末，考生的思維量是非常大的。然后根據(jù)圖表內(nèi)容組織要點(diǎn)，要注意要點(diǎn)的完整性，不能有遺漏。在完成圖表作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。