Question

假設(shè)你是李明，剛從學校安排的“澳大利亞行”返回北京。請給在澳大利亞時借住的家庭寫一封信，信的內(nèi)容主要包括：

1．你已安全返回北京

2．感謝他們的熱情接待

1）去機場迎接

2）Jenny陪伴游覽名勝古跡

3．希望他們有時間來北京游覽

Dear Mr and Mrs Johnson,

I’m writing to tell you that________________________________________________________

Best wishes,

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear Mr and Mrs Johnson,

I’m writing to tell you that I had a safe journey back to Beijing. Thanks to your hospitality, I had a wonderful time in Australia. It was my first time to go abroad and I was naturally a bit nervous when I first arrived. When I saw you at the airport, however, I knew from your warm smile of welcome that everything would be all right. With Jenny’s help, I visited so many places of interest in Australia, which leaves me quite a good memory. I hope some day you will come to visit Beijing and I can return your kindness.

Best wishes,

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

考點：提綱類作文

點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。