Question

寫作 （20分）
假設(shè)你叫李華，是一家英文雜志社的心理咨詢師。某中學(xué)生小王給你寫信，提到自己偏胖，想節(jié)食減肥，征求你的意見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)你給她回一封信，談?wù)勀銓?duì)該問(wèn)題的見(jiàn)解。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1．健康比漂亮更重要；
2．學(xué)生以學(xué)習(xí)為主，不要過(guò)于注重外貌和別人的看法；
3．可通過(guò)多鍛煉身體保持健康，要改變不良的飲食習(xí)慣；
4．健康的心態(tài)也很重要。
注意：  1．短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．詞數(shù)：100左右。    3．參考詞匯：state of mind 心態(tài)
Dear Xiao Wang,
                                                                              
                                                                               
                                                                              
                                                                               
                                                                              
                                                                               
                                                                              
                                                                               
                                                                              
                                                                               
                                                                              
                                                                               
Yours,
Li Hua 

Answer 1

Dear Xiao Wang,
I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting.
It is only natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful. However, in my opinion, health is more important than beauty. For a student, studying is the first thing to consider while appearance is the second. So do not let others’ opinions affect your normal life. However, if you do want to lose weight, it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing unhealthy eating habits. The most important thing is that you keep a healthy state of mind, as it will help with your studies, and will also help you overcome difficulties in dieting.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you and I’m looking forward to your next letter.
Yours,
Li Hua

解析這是一篇書信，文章開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，只需要表達(dá)清楚要點(diǎn)。寫作時(shí)首先要注意文章的段落結(jié)構(gòu)，因?yàn)檫@是回信，所以第一段應(yīng)該交代上封信的內(nèi)容，要解答的問(wèn)題。第二段主要是給出筆者的建議。第三段總結(jié)。其中第二段是重點(diǎn)。
在表達(dá)要點(diǎn)是切記不能逐字逐句翻譯，不能用漢語(yǔ)式的表達(dá)，這就需要用地道的英語(yǔ)句型，還要使用一些常用短語(yǔ)，這樣才能符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣。如：I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting.這是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句的用法。還有It is only natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful. /it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing unhealthy eating habits ，it做形式主語(yǔ)也是英語(yǔ)中常用的句型。studying is the first thing to consider while appearance is the second.這句話中，while的用法也很巧妙。另外名詞性從句也是英語(yǔ)寫作中常用的，如：The most important thing is that you keep a healthy state of mind。我們?cè)趯懽髦幸�熟練的運(yùn)用這些常用句型，而且要經(jīng)常嘗試不同的表達(dá)法，不能千篇一律，才能寫出好的文章。