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16．假如你是李華，看到美國(guó)留學(xué)生Sharon 在網(wǎng)上發(fā)帖，希望有人能幫助她提高普通話(huà)（ Mandarin）水平，她可以教英語(yǔ)作為回報(bào)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)給她寫(xiě)一封電子郵件．
（1）表達(dá)給她提供幫助的意愿；
（2）說(shuō)明你能勝任輔導(dǎo)的理由；
（3）給出講好普通話(huà)的兩點(diǎn)建議；
（4）提出你學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的具體需求．
注意：（1）詞數(shù)：120詞左右，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好（不計(jì)總數(shù)）；
（2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；
（3）文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)．
Hi Sharon，
This is Li Hua．I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin．I am quite interested in it．I think I'm fit for it．（表達(dá)給她提供幫助的意愿）As a student，I have been learning Mandarin for many yea rs．In addition，I am Chinese，which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life．So I'm quite confident thatI can help you learn Mandarin．（說(shuō)明自己能勝任輔導(dǎo)的理由）Learning Mandarin takes time，so if you want to learn it well，you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday．As the saying goes，practice makes perfect．Besides，you can also read some books in Chinese、see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes．Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning，by which you are sure to make great progress．（講好普通話(huà)的兩點(diǎn)建議）
In your post，you say you can teach English as a reward．It is just what I want．I'm eager to improve my English．So，if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin，you can also help me improve my English．We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese，so that we can improve our oral speaking．Hope for you early reply!（提出自己學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的具體需求）．
Sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于中英文學(xué)習(xí)的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱(chēng)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一表達(dá)給她提供幫助的意愿；二說(shuō)明自己能勝任輔導(dǎo)的理由；三講好普通話(huà)的兩點(diǎn)建議；四提出自己學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的具體需求．
高分句型：
1．In addition，I am Chinese，which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life．句子里which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，代指主句； a must 是名詞，表示"必須要做的一件事"．
此外，我是中國(guó)人，這就意味著普通話(huà)是日常我和別人交流的必需品．
2．Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning，by which you are sure to make great progress．句子里Speaking and listening 是動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)；which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，代指主句．
聽(tīng)和說(shuō)對(duì)于學(xué)習(xí)語(yǔ)言是很重要的，通過(guò)聽(tīng)和說(shuō)的練習(xí)你肯定能取得進(jìn)步的．

解答 Hi Sharon，
This is Li Hua．I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin．I am quite interested in it．I think I'm fit for it．（表達(dá)給她提供幫助的意愿）As a student，I have been learning Mandarin for many yea rs．In addition，I am Chinese，which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life．【高分句型一】So I'm quite confident thatI can help you learn Mandarin．（說(shuō)明自己能勝任輔導(dǎo)的理由）Learning Mandarin takes time，so if you want to learn it well，you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday．As the saying goes，practice makes perfect．Besides，you can also read some books in Chinese、see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes．Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning，by which you are sure to make great progress．【高分句型二】（講好普通話(huà)的兩點(diǎn)建議）
In your post，you say you can teach English as a reward．It is just what I want．I'm eager to improve my English．So，if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin，you can also help me improve my English．We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese，so that we can improve our oral speaking．Hope for you early reply!（提出自己學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的具體需求）
                                                                                                                           Yours Sincerey                                                                                                                                  L i Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類(lèi)作文．
作文的書(shū)寫(xiě)也是很重要的，一般書(shū)寫(xiě)的好壞會(huì)是得分有五分的變動(dòng)，如果特別差，降低的分?jǐn)?shù)還要多．所以在高一練字是每個(gè)學(xué)生必須要做的一件事．