Question

在學(xué)習(xí)、生活和工作中，學(xué)會(huì)與人合作是非常重要的。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表中提供的信息，寫(xiě)一篇題為“Being a Good Partner ”的英文演講稿。

為何合作	互相學(xué)習(xí)  節(jié)省時(shí)間和精力
與誰(shuí)合作	與喜歡的人合作	心情愉快同甘共苦
	與不喜歡的人合作	學(xué)會(huì)容忍，發(fā)現(xiàn)優(yōu)點(diǎn)
怎樣合作	你的觀點(diǎn)…… （至少2個(gè)）

注意：
1. 對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)，逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯:
2. 詞數(shù)100左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3. 提示詞：合作   cooperation  n.
Good afternoon, everyone!
The topic of my speech today is “being a good partner” ___________________           
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Answer 1

Good afternoon , everyone!
The topic of my speech today is “being a good partner”. Cooperation is  a good way for us to learn from each other as well as to save us a lot of  time and energy .
We will be lucky enough to find someone we like to cooperate with, which will make us feel very happy.  However, it can be difficult to team up with someone we dislike. In this case, learn to put up with some of his shortcomings and try to discover his advantages 
How can we become a good partner? In my opinion, firstly, we should try to listen to
others’ opinions .If he makes mistakes, try to point them out in a polite way.Besides,never force your ideas on others.
Thank you for your listening!

試題分析：試題貼近考生實(shí)際生活，給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡(jiǎn)略，主要圍繞為何合作，與誰(shuí)合作，怎樣合作三部分展開(kāi)，其中“怎樣合作”要求給出自己的觀點(diǎn)，屬于半開(kāi)放性話題,故需要自由發(fā)揮的地方較多.需要注意不要偏離文章中心.在寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意把握好以下幾點(diǎn)：(1)書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，卷面整潔。(2)行文緊湊，過(guò)渡自然。(3)要點(diǎn)完整，表達(dá)清楚。(4)語(yǔ)法正確，時(shí)態(tài)準(zhǔn)確。(5)用詞無(wú)誤，控制得當(dāng)(100詞之間)。(6)認(rèn)真復(fù)查，胸有成竹。尤其是“怎樣合作”部分要求給出自己的觀點(diǎn)，要注意不要偏離文章中心
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】(1)使用一些如Firstly,besides,however等承接詞進(jìn)行連接,層次清晰。(2)多變的高級(jí)句式如非限制性定語(yǔ)從句的使用，We will be lucky enough to find someone we like to cooperate with, which will make us feel very happy，另外，設(shè)問(wèn)句的運(yùn)用How can we become a good partner?使文章銜接更自然。還有it can be difficult to...等