Question

書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）（請(qǐng)將答案寫在答卷上的規(guī)定位置。）

污染的原因	污染類型	造成后果	建議措施
人類的生產(chǎn)和生活活動(dòng)（已列出）	1. 空氣污染 2. 噪音污染 3. 水污染	1. 物種減少 2. 人類健康受損 3. 環(huán)境惡化	(請(qǐng)自己列出兩條)

 

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格的內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇題為SAVE EARTH, SAVE US的公益廣告解說(shuō)詞。

注意：  1. 詞數(shù)：120詞左右；

內(nèi)容要涵蓋上面所列的幾條；

不能逐詞翻譯。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

SAVE EARTH, SAVE US

With the development of modern society, pollution caused by human activities is becoming a more and more serious problem.

Smoke from factories and gases from vehicles are the main reasons for air pollution. Rivers are polluted when people throw waste into them, or when factories pour waste water into them. Modern lifestyle and modern ways of production also cause noise pollution. As a result, many species are dying out. More and more people are suffering from health problems.

Enough attention should be paid to this problem and measures should be taken. Firstly, we should make laws to prevent factories from pouring waste water into rivers and sending smoke into the air without being dealt with. Secondly, we should raise people’s awareness of the serious problem and call on more people to protect the environment. Only by working together can we help the environment!

【解析】

試題分析：考查表格類作文的寫作。討論SAVE EARTH, SAVE US。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)公益廣告解說(shuō)詞，具體信息是以表格的形式給出，考點(diǎn)只需要適當(dāng)串聯(lián)即可，在寫作的時(shí)候一定要使用合適的連接詞來(lái)連接全文，讓文章成為一個(gè)整體，同時(shí)要注意使用英語(yǔ)句型，也要使用倒裝句，定語(yǔ)從句等特殊的句式來(lái)提高文章的多樣性。如：Only by working together can we help the environment!還要用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞把句與句連起來(lái)，如：Firstly, Secondly等

考點(diǎn)：考查表格類作文的寫作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于表格類作文，此類作文雖然好寫，但是要寫出特色是很不容易的。關(guān)鍵是要點(diǎn)要全面覆蓋，不能有遺漏和省略。寫作的時(shí)候運(yùn)用多種表達(dá)方式，讓句子有變化。