Question

19．假設(shè)你是李夏，你的美國(guó)筆友Sam來(lái)信關(guān)心你參加高考的情況，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)回信告知．
1．考試日期與科目；
2．考試準(zhǔn)備情況；
3．考試吋的狀態(tài)；
4．對(duì)試題的感受；
5．可能的考試結(jié)果．
注意：
1、詞數(shù)120左右；
2、開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)尾語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；
3、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
4、文中不能出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
參考詞匯：高考college entrance examination
Dear  Sam，
Thank you for your concern．Dear Sam，
Thank you for your concern．Well，I'm now taking the once-a-year college entrance examination．We are scheduled to attend the exam on June 7th and 8th，on the first day of which Chinese and math will be tested，the second day geography，history，politics and English．
Over the past ten months，we have been busy in preparing for this examination．Besides listening to teachers carefully in class，we often work deep into night．Therefore，I believe I can succeed．
At first，I felt a little bit nervous but soon I calmed down because Chinese and math，I came to realize，were very easy and English is my favorite subject，you know．So I suppose I can get a good mark which will enable me to enter my ideal college．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Xia．

Best  wishes!
Yours，
Li  Xia．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，給美國(guó)筆友寫(xiě)一封信，告知他你參加高考的情況．
寫(xiě)作時(shí)人稱以第一人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主．
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1．考試日期與科目；2．考試準(zhǔn)備情況；3．考試時(shí)的狀態(tài)；4．對(duì)試題的感受；5．可能的考試結(jié)果．
重要短語(yǔ)：reform sth（代表），be replaced by（被代替），share sth with sb（與某人分享某物），needless to say （更不用說(shuō)），according to （根據(jù)），have positive effects on（對(duì)…有影響），be of great significance（非常有意義），loss of （損失），keep fit（保持健康），contributes to（促成），broaden one's horizons（拓寬某人的視野），in turn （反過(guò)來(lái)又），be beneficial to （對(duì)…有益）．
【高分句型一】
1．We are scheduled to attend the exam on June 7th and 8th，on the first day of which Chinese and math will be tested，the second day geography，history，politics and English．
此處是"介詞短語(yǔ)+關(guān)系代詞"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，主句為"We are scheduled to attend the exam on June 7th and 8th"，關(guān)系代詞"which"指代主句中的"the exam"．
【高分句型二】
2．So I suppose I can get a good mark which will enable me to enter my ideal college．此處是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞為"a good mark"，關(guān)系代詞"which"在從句中作主語(yǔ)．

解答 Dear Sam，
Thank you for your concern．Well，I'm now taking the once-a-year college entrance examination．We are scheduled to attend the exam on June 7th and 8th，on the first day of which Chinese and math will be tested，the second day geography，history，politics and English．【高分句型一】（考試日期與科目）
Over the past ten months，we have been busy in preparing for this examination．Besides listening to teachers carefully in class，we often work deep into night．（考試準(zhǔn)備情況）Therefore，I believe I can succeed．（可能的考試結(jié)果）
At first，I felt a little bit nervous but soon I calmed down because Chinese and math，I came to realize，were very easy and English is my favorite subject，you know．（考試吋的狀態(tài)及對(duì)試題的感受） So I suppose I can get a good mark which will enable me to enter my ideal college．【高分句型二】（可能的考試結(jié)果）
Best wishes!
Yours，
 Li Xia

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