Question

12．下文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪 除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
My neighbor's children love playing hide-and-seek as other children do，but everybody
had imagined that the game they played themselves last week would be reported in the local
newspaper．One afternoon，they are playing at the street comer．Paul，only five year old，
hid and locked himself in a storage mailbox in accident His sister，Nancy，heard his cries and realized what had happened，so she immediately asked a mailman open the metal door．Paul
was free，but he had such bad a scare that he could not stop ay．The mailman told him that
next time he wanted to hide in a mail box，he should remember to put the stamp on himself．
When he heard that，Paul burst into laughing．

Answer 1

分析 這段文字講述的是鄰居家的孩子都喜歡玩捉迷藏，一次，有一個小男孩捉迷藏時不小心把自己鎖進了郵箱里，他姐姐發(fā)現(xiàn)后叫來郵遞員打開把他解救出來，這件事后來被報導在當?shù)氐膱蠹埳希?/p>

解答 My neighbor's children love playing hide-and-seek as other children do，but everybody had imagined that the 
                                                                                                                 nobody
game they played  themselves  last week would be reported in the local newspaper One afternoon，they  are
                     去掉themselves．were 
playing at the street comer．Paul，only five year old，hid and locked himself in a storage mailbox in accident
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His sister，Nancy，heard his cries and realized what had happened，so she immediately asked a mailman∧open
                                                                                                                                                          to
the metal door．Paul was free，but he had such bad a scare that he could not stop cry．The mailman told him that
                                                               so                                                    crying
next time he wanted to hide in a mail box，he should remember to put the stamp on himself．When he heard that，
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Paul burst into laughing．
                      laughter

1．every改為nobody；考查代詞，根據(jù)句意"沒有人想到他們玩的這個游戲會在當?shù)貓蠹埳蠄髮?得知應該用nobody．
2．去掉themselves；考查定語從句，這里they played是一個省略關系代詞的定語從句，關系代詞作play的賓語，所以去掉themselves．
3．a(chǎn)re改為were；考查動詞時態(tài)，短文講的是發(fā)生了的事情，所以要用過去時．
4．year改為years；考查名詞復數(shù)，五歲的正確表達是：five years old．
5．in改為by；考查介詞，by accident是固定短語，意為"偶然"．
6．open前面加to；考查動詞不定式，ask sb to do 是固定用法意為"讓某人干某事"．
7．such改為so；考查such和so的區(qū)別，such是形容詞，后跟名詞；so是副詞，后跟形容詞，bad是形容詞，所以這里用so．
8．cry改為crying；考查stop的用法，stop doing意為停止正在做的事情．
9．the改為a；考查冠詞，這里泛指一張郵票，所以用a．
10．laughing改為laughter；考查固定短語搭配，burst into laughter是固定短語，意為"突然大笑"．

點評 短文改錯首先要快速閱讀短文，了解短文的中心思想，然后分析句子成分，弄清句式結構關系，再運用基礎語言知識找出短文中的錯誤加以修改．