Question

請你根據(jù)所給材料、提綱以及要求寫一篇英文稿件。
背景材料：
編者按：本期刊出Lora的來信，歡迎讀者就信中談到的問題進行分析并提出建議。
Dear editor.
I’m a senior high school student,and I want to work part-time this summer. I think it is good to do so, but my parents don’t agree with me. I just can’t understand them and I need your advice.
Lara
要求：1.短文須寫在答題卡的指定區(qū)域。
2.短文詞數(shù)120左右。
3.內(nèi)容充實，可適當增加使行文流暢，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫。
4.書寫須清晰、工整。
提綱：第1段：Lora利用暑假打工的理由(賺零花錢及學(xué)會獨立、如何處世等)
第2段：Lora父母不同意的理由(對學(xué)習(xí)及個人安全等方面的考慮)
第3段：你給Lora的具體建議
I think that the following are the reasons why Lora wants to work part-time.
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Answer 1

I think that the following are the reasons why Lora wants to work part-time . First, she can make some pocket money to meet her daily needs and thus develop a sense of independence. Second. she can learn how to deal with various problems in the workplace. Third, she can build up new friendships and improve social skills.
But her parents may regard learning as an increasingly important task for Lora. This holiday should be a catch-up time for independent study. Besides, personal safety may also be one of their major considerations.
My advice for Lora is this: make a detailed plan for her study and work; ask her friends to work together with her, and tell her parents that she ean manage things properly. I wish Lora a pleasant summer.

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