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2．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞．
     2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分．
Last week，my mother and I went to shoe shop to buy a pair of new shoes for me．When we got here，I noticed a foreign lady talk to a salesgirl．But the salesgirl didn't understand that the foreigner was saying．They looked very worrying．So I decided to help them．I went up to the foreign lady and talked to her by English．I learned that the lady came from Australia and wanted to buy a pair of running shoe．I told this to the salesgirl．The lady was very much glad when she took her shoes．All of them expressed their thanks to me．And I fell happy that I could help others．

Answer 1

分析 文章大意：本文主要講述了作者幫助一位外國(guó)人買鞋的經(jīng)歷．上周，作者和媽媽去一家鞋店買鞋，當(dāng)時(shí)注意到一位外國(guó)女士和銷售的女孩說話，但是那個(gè)女孩不懂外國(guó)說什么．作者決定幫助她們．最后那位外國(guó)女士買到了鞋，能幫助他人作者感到非常高興．

解答 Last week，my mother and I went to/\shoe shop to buy a pair of new shoes for me．When we got here，
                                                    a                                                                                       there
I noticed a foreign lady  talk to a salesgirl．But the salesgirl didn't understand that the foreigner was saying．
                                   talking                                                                         what
They looked very worrying．So I decided to help them．I went up to the foreign lady and talked to her by English．
                            worried                                                                                                                 in
I learned that the lady came from Australia and wanted to buy a pair of running shoe．I told this to the salesgirl．
                                                                                                                    shoes
The lady was very much glad when she took her shoes．All of them expressed their thanks to me．And I fell happy that I could help others．
                           去掉                                                Both                                                                 felt
1．shoe shop  前面加a，考查冠詞，shop是可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)，文章中第一次出現(xiàn)的時(shí)候用不定冠詞．
2．here--there．考查副詞． 本文主要是陳述過去的事情，所以應(yīng)該是"當(dāng)我們到達(dá)那里"．
3．talk--talking，考查非謂語動(dòng)詞，notice sb doing sth表示注意到某人做某事．
4．that--what，考查名詞性從句． 本句中含有賓語從句，從句中缺少賓語，所以用what．
5．worrying--worried．考查形容詞． 本句中主語是人，所以應(yīng)該用-ed形式的形容詞，-ing形式的形容詞修飾物．
6．by--in，考查介詞搭配． 用英語說話，應(yīng)該用介詞in．
7．shoe--shoes，考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)．shoe是可數(shù)名詞，一雙鞋是兩只鞋，所以要用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
8．去掉much，考查副詞． 非常高興直接用very修飾，very much通常修飾動(dòng)詞．
9．All--Both，考查代詞．文章中感謝作者的是那位外國(guó)女士和買鞋的女孩，應(yīng)該是兩個(gè)人，所以用both．
10，fell--felt．考查動(dòng)詞過去式． 文中表示"我感到高興"，而fell是fall的過去式，feel的過去式應(yīng)該是felt．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇短文改錯(cuò)考查冠詞，動(dòng)詞形式，名詞單復(fù)數(shù)，時(shí)態(tài)等，平時(shí)注重多積累，答題時(shí)結(jié)合句意和語法進(jìn)行分析，答完后通讀，是否通順，符合邏輯．