Question

6．你在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上讀到一篇關(guān)于"九零后"的英語(yǔ)文章，你打算以"Post 90's Generation"為題，用第一人稱(chēng)給《二十一世紀(jì)英文報(bào)》寫(xiě)一篇文章，內(nèi)容包括：
注意：1．必須包括表格中的所有內(nèi)容；
2．為了使文章通順完整，可以適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容；
3．詞數(shù)：120～150．
Post90's Generation
We，post90's generation，are living in a society full of fiercer competition，and developing our special manners and values，which has raised people's concern．（點(diǎn)明文章的主題）
It's true that the post90's generation have some weaknesses．Some of us，for example，rely on our parents too much and tend to live comfortable lives．Some are even selfish and care little for others．（九零后的缺點(diǎn)）
At the same time，the post90's generation desire to learn more about the world around us，and we are independent in thinking．We always keep up with modern science and technology and have many new ideas．（九零后的優(yōu)點(diǎn)）
I think the post90's generation should carry forward our strong points and overcome the weaknesses，and try to tell the world that we are a hopeful generation．（自己的看法）．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于"九零后"的文章．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱(chēng)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一 點(diǎn)明文章的主題；二 九零后的缺點(diǎn)；三 九零后的優(yōu)點(diǎn)；四 自己的看法．
高分句型：
1，．We，post90's generation，are living in a society full of fiercer competition，and developing our special manners and values，which has raised people's concern．句子里We是主語(yǔ)，和post90's generation是同位語(yǔ)的關(guān)系；developing和are living 是并列的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞；which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，代指主句．
我們九零后生活在一個(gè)充滿激烈競(jìng)爭(zhēng)的社會(huì)，形成了特別的行為方式和價(jià)值觀，這些東西引起了人們的關(guān)注．
2．It's true that the post90's generation have some weaknesses．句子里It做形式主語(yǔ)，代指 that the post90's generation have some weaknesses．
我們九零后確實(shí)有一些缺點(diǎn)．

解答 Post90's Generation
We，post90's generation，are living in a society full of fiercer competition，and developing our special manners and values，which has raised people's concern．【高分句型一】（點(diǎn)明文章的主題）
It's true that the post90's generation have some weaknesses．【高分句型二】Some of us，for example，rely on our parents too much and tend to live comfortable lives．Some are even selfish and care little for others．（九零后的缺點(diǎn)）
At the same time，the post90's generation desire to learn more about the world around us，and we are independent in thinking．We always keep up with modern science and technology and have many new ideas．（九零后的優(yōu)點(diǎn)）
I think the post90's generation should carry forward our strong points and overcome the weaknesses，and try to tell the world that we are a hopeful generation．（自己的看法）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查開(kāi)放類(lèi)作文．
寫(xiě)作文的第一步是審題，即要弄清楚作文的時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)和要點(diǎn)，特別是要點(diǎn)，一定要全面，把題目所要求的東西都要列舉出來(lái)，不要遺漏，同時(shí)還要注意要點(diǎn)要貼題，否則會(huì)造成跑題的現(xiàn)象．