Question

2．請(qǐng)你代表2015屆高三學(xué)生給外教Jeff寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1．邀請(qǐng)他參加2015屆高三年級(jí)的成人儀式；
2．請(qǐng)他做簡(jiǎn)短發(fā)言；
3．時(shí)間：3月30日（周一）下午3：30；
4．地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校禮堂．
注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于50．
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
　　提示詞：成人儀式the Coming-of-age ceremony
Dear Jeff，How is everything going？You know，we are going to be 18，which means a new chapter to us．To celebrate this significant moment，we will hold the Coming-of-age ceremony in our lecture hall at 3：30 pm on March 30th．As one of the most popular teachers in our school life，you are more than welcome to witness the wonderful occasion．If you can give a short speech then，it will be our great honor．Looking forward to seeing you．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，給外教Jeff寫一封電子郵件．．邀請(qǐng)他參加2015屆高三年級(jí)的成人儀式、告知其時(shí)間地點(diǎn)并請(qǐng)他作簡(jiǎn)短發(fā)言．
寫作時(shí)人稱以第一和第二人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．開頭引出話題-寫信的目的； 2．儀式的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；3．邀請(qǐng)參加并作簡(jiǎn)短發(fā)言．
重要短語(yǔ)：mean sth （意味著某事），a new chapter to us （對(duì)…某人來說是新的篇章），celebrate sth（慶祝某事），hold the ceremony（舉行儀式），be more than welcome（非常受歡迎），witness the wonderful occasion（見證這個(gè)精彩的時(shí)刻），give a speech（作演講），look forward to doing（期望做某事）．
【高分句型一】
1．You know，we are going to be 18，which means a new chapter to us．
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，主句為"we are going to be 18"，關(guān)系代詞"which"在從句中作主語(yǔ)，指代前面整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容．
【高分句型二】
2．To celebrate this significant moment，we will hold the Coming-of-age ceremony in our lecture hall at 3：30 pm on March 30th．
此處為由不定式短語(yǔ)"To celebrate this significant moment"作目的狀語(yǔ)，主句為"we will hold the Coming-of-age ceremony in our lecture hall at 3：30 pm on March 30th"．
【高分句型三】
3．If you can give a short speech then，it will be our great honor．
此處是由連詞"if"引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主句為"it will be our great honor"．

解答 Dear Jeff，
How is everything going？You know，we are going to be 18，which means a new chapter to us．【高分句型一】（開頭引出話題-寫信的目的）
To celebrate this significant moment，we will hold the Coming-of-age ceremony in our lecture hall at 3：30 pm on March 30th．【高分句型二】（儀式的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)）
As one of the most popular teachers in our school life，you are more than welcome to witness the wonderful occasion．If you can give a short speech then，it will be our great honor．【高分句型三】Looking forward to seeing you．（邀請(qǐng)參加并作簡(jiǎn)短發(fā)言）

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