分析 本文是開放性作文,根據(jù)所給提示信息,針對這一現(xiàn)象發(fā)表看法,以此為話題進行思維和聯(lián)想,自由發(fā)揮寫一封建議信,又屬于提綱作文.
在寫作時以第一人稱和第二人稱為主,時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主.
重要短語:bring sb convenience(給某人帶來便捷),would like to do sth(想要做某事),stare at(盯著看),miss the chance(錯過機會),surf the Internet(上網(wǎng)),cross the street(穿過街),care about(關(guān)心),as far as I am concerned(就我所關(guān)注的而言),do harm to(對…有害),hold up(舉起).
【高分句型一】
1.However,more and more phubbers,especially young people,would like to stare at their screen,①surfing or playing games,②no matter whether they are on a bus or a train,and no matter how far the journey is.
①此處是由兩個現(xiàn)在分詞短語"surfing or playing games"作伴隨狀語,主句為"young people,would like to stare at their screen",主句的主語"young people".
②此處是由"no matter+疑問詞"引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句.
【高分句型二】
2.And even they will not miss the chance to surf the in internet when crossing the street.
此處是時間狀語從句中的省略"連詞when+現(xiàn)在分詞",可以理解為"when they cross the street".
3.They never care about what happened around.
此處是由疑問代詞"what"引導(dǎo)的賓語從句.
【高分句型四】
4.As far as I am concerned,phubbing on a moving bus does harm to their eyes.
此處是由動名詞短語"phubbing on a moving bus"作主語,謂語動詞為"does harm to",賓語為"their eyes",動名詞作主語謂語動詞用單數(shù).
解答 The mobile phone has been part of our life.Mobile phones bring us much convenience.However,more and more phubbers,especially young people,would like to stare at their screen,surfing or playing games,no matter whether they are on a bus or a train,and no matter how far the journey is.【高分句型一】And even they will not miss the chance to surf the in internet when crossing the street.【高分句型二】They never care about what happened around.【高分句型三】(結(jié)合自身實際提出應(yīng)采取的積極態(tài)度和應(yīng)對方法)
As far as I am concerned,phubbing on a moving bus does harm to their eyes.【高分句型四】Besides,phubbing is also dangerous while crossing the street.Wish phubbers hold up their heads to enjoy surroundings.(看法)
點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題,并此為基礎(chǔ)進行思維和聯(lián)想,自由發(fā)揮.不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力,而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求.寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟:1. 認(rèn)真審題,找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句,確定中心思想.2. 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句,草擬提綱,梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3. 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài).注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次.4.最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況,有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等.
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