Question

書面表達(dá)

根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容和提示，寫一封80—120字的信。

張蕾是武漢某大學(xué)2012屆的畢業(yè)生，家住香港三路。他從報(bào)上獲悉海鵬公司（Haipen Company）正在招聘一名具有商業(yè)經(jīng)驗(yàn)、英語(yǔ)良好的職員（clerk）。她很高興，希望應(yīng)聘。張蕾給該公司經(jīng)理（manager）林先生寫信，想申請(qǐng)得到這個(gè)職位（go apply for …）。信中要簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己的情況：現(xiàn)年23歲，在大學(xué)學(xué)主修英語(yǔ)、電子商務(wù)(typing, communicating) 等課程，希望經(jīng)理能容出幾分鐘時(shí)間準(zhǔn)予面洽。假設(shè)你是張蕾，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫一封信，寫信日期是2013年7月18日。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

No. 3 Hongkong Street 

Wuhan

July 18th, 2004

Haipeng Company

Dear Mr. Lin,

I have learned from newspaper that you are looking for a clerk who has some general experience in business and English. I would like to apply for that position. I am 23 years old and a graduate of a university in 2004. At the university, I studied many subjects such as English in major, business ( typing and writing in shorthand ) . I have no problem in writing and speaking English, for I have always been dealing with foreigners in English.

I believe that I shall become fit for the job very soon.

If you can offer me a few minutes, I would like to talk to you.

Sincerely yours,

Zhang Lei

 

【解析】

試題分析：考查書信類作文的寫作。以張蕾名義給公司經(jīng)理（manager）林先生寫信，想申請(qǐng)得到這個(gè)職位，具體信息已經(jīng)給出，考生需要需要注意書信的格式，寫信人的地址和寫信日期，收信人的地址，都要交代，要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)串聯(lián)即可，在寫作的時(shí)候一定要使用合適的連接詞來連接全文，讓文章成為一個(gè)整體，同時(shí)要注意使用英語(yǔ)句型，也要使用倒裝句，定語(yǔ)從句等特殊的句式來提高文章的多樣性。如I have learned from newspaper that you are looking for a clerk who has some general experience in business and English.還要用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞把句與句連起來。

考點(diǎn)：考查書信類作文的寫作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于書信類作文，此類作文要注意格式和要點(diǎn)要全面覆蓋，不能有遺漏和省略。寫作的時(shí)候運(yùn)用多種表達(dá)方式，讓句子有變化。