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非選擇題部分 (共40分)
第三部分：寫(xiě)作（共兩節(jié)，滿(mǎn)分40分）
第一節(jié)：短文改錯(cuò)（滿(mǎn)分10分）
下面短文中有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在下面加上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)上修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
As the student volunteer for the Expo 2010 Shanghai, I feel very proudly since the World Expo will promote the exchange of different cultures and show the latest achievements of civilizations around the globe. And I have to say lots of bad behaviors still exist around us. For example, some people didn’t obey the traffic rule when crossing the road, and some even spit in public, which makes me feel disappointing. These bad behaviors will spoil the image of our country so it is high time that we solved this problems.
In my opinion, we should behave politely and spare no efforts build a harmonious society. Besides, some strict measures must be taken to stop people from behave badly. Only in this way can we will make Expo 2010 Shanghai China a great success.

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As the student volunteer for the Expo 2010 Shanghai, I feel very proudly since the World
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Expo will promote the exchange of different cultures and show the latest achievements of
civilizations around the globe. And I have to say lots of bad behaviors still exist around us. For
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example, some people didn’t obey the traffic rule when crossing the road, and some even spit in
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public, which makes me feel disappointing. These bad behaviors will spoil the image of our
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country so it is high time that we solved this problems.
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In my opinion, we should behave politely and spare no efforts ∧build a harmonious
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society. Besides, some strict measures must be taken to stop people from behave badly. Only in this way
behaving
can we will make Expo 2010 Shanghai China a great success.

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