Question

假定你是李華，你班同學(xué)決定為小明舉辦生日聚會。請你寫信邀請外教Susan參加，要點包括：
1. 時間：周五晚8點至9點
2. 地點：學(xué)生俱樂部
3. 內(nèi)容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戲等
4. 要求：備小禮物
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 答案必須寫在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置
Hi Susan,
We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming’s birthday.                         
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Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

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Hi Susan,
We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming’s birthday. We’d like to invite you to the party. We want to give him a surprise, so please keep quiet about it. We’ll gather at the Student’s Club at 8 pm this Friday, after the evening classes. And it’s going to last about an hour. We each will prepare a little present. When he comes, we will light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday” together for him. Then the cake will be cut and we’ll sing songs and play games. It’ll be nice to see how excited he will be. I’m sure you will have a good time at the party, too.
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：寫作主要考查學(xué)生綜合運用英語語言的能力，涉及學(xué)生的詞匯量，正確運用單詞的能力，對所學(xué)語法的掌握程度，能否按照英語習(xí)慣正確表達(dá)所要表達(dá)的意思的能力等等。測試的題型主要有應(yīng)用文，看圖作文和提示作文。測試內(nèi)容常常與學(xué)生的生活密切相關(guān)，也可能是環(huán)�；蛏鐣�焦點。
點評：提醒考生應(yīng)該注意適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，比如適當(dāng)選用表示因果、遞進(jìn)、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連接詞，使文章流暢、通順，并避免因反復(fù)使用句式相同的簡單句而造成的單調(diào)感。