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9．近來，"中國式過馬路"Chinese Style of Crossing Streets在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上熱炒．請結(jié)合下面表格寫一篇短文談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />

現(xiàn)象	很多人過馬路時不看紅綠燈
原因[來源：學(xué)|科|網(wǎng)]	1．缺乏交通安全意識 2．匆忙趕時間
措施	1．遵守交通規(guī)則 2．你自己的建議…

注意：1．文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和班級名稱．
2．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．字?jǐn)?shù)：120詞左右，不可逐字翻譯．
3．參考詞語：缺乏…意識 lack awareness of
Chinese Style of Crossing StreetsChinese style of crossing streets has been a hot topic on the Internet recently．Now many people cross streets without looking at the traffic lights．Why？I think there are two main reasons．Some people lack awareness of traffic safety．Others are so busy that they don't want to wait for the green light for a while．（出現(xiàn)的原因）
However，it has brought danger to themselves as well as to others．So I hope something must be done to avoid traffic accidents．高分句型1：For example，whoever breaks the traffic rules，he or she should be punished．（作者的看法）
As middle school students，we should obey the traffic rules．What's more，I will try my best to advise people to follow the rules．高分句型2：Only in this way can we cross streets safely．（應(yīng)對措施）．

Answer 1

分析 本文是篇議論文，要根據(jù)三點要求來完成，分別是 1．中國式過馬路現(xiàn)象；2．原因，內(nèi)容包括：1．缺乏交通安全意識2．匆忙趕時間．3．措施．寫作時要注意以下幾點：1、寫作內(nèi)容涵蓋所有要點，不可遺漏；2、要注意時態(tài)語態(tài)，避免出現(xiàn)語法和拼寫錯誤；3、適當(dāng)運用高級詞匯和句型來為自己的文章增色．
【亮點說明】文章要點齊全，表達(dá)思路明確，知識點運用恰當(dāng)?shù)轿�，文中使用了非常好的短語和詞匯為文章增色不少，比如1、熱點話題：a hot topic  2、缺乏交通安全意識：lack awareness of traffic safety等．還運用了一些長句使得文章結(jié)構(gòu)更加嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)合理，如For example，whoever breaks the traffic rules，he or she should be punished．
和 Only in this way can we cross streets safely．等．

解答 Chinese style of crossing streets has been a hot topic on the Internet recently．（點明主題）
Now many people cross streets without looking at the traffic lights．Why？I think there are two main reasons．Some people lack awareness of traffic safety．Others are so busy that they don't want to wait for the green light for a while．（出現(xiàn)的原因）
However，it has brought danger to themselves as well as to others．So I hope something must be done to avoid traffic accidents．高分句型1：For example，whoever breaks the traffic rules，he or she should be punished．（作者的看法）
As middle school students，we should obey the traffic rules．What's more，I will try my best to advise people to follow the rules．高分句型2：Only in this way can we cross streets safely．（應(yīng)對措施）

點評 圖表類在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點，寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需要積累短語和重要句型．