Question

在學(xué)校，對(duì)于我們學(xué)生來說，與老師建立良好的關(guān)系非常重要。請(qǐng)就“師生關(guān)系”這一主題用英語寫一篇120詞左右的短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶�，�?nèi)容包括：
1. 良好的師生關(guān)系的重要性；
2. 怎樣培養(yǎng)良好的師生關(guān)系。
注意：可適當(dāng)發(fā)展，以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

Good relationships between our teachers and us play an important part in our study and life. Only with good relationships can our teachers achieve the desired teaching effect, and can we do well in our studies.
This ideal relationship depends on mutual effort. One the one hand, we should respect our teachers and their efforts paid to us. We should be ready to follow their practical advice. On the other hand, our teachers should not only be kind, friendly and patient to us, but also treat each student fairly and equally. They must be responsible for their teaching and ready to help us when we are in trouble. In a word, if teachers and we are willing to do their best, the relationship between us will be quite beneficial.

試題分析：作文為一篇材料作文，就內(nèi)容來講包括兩個(gè)方面的問題，一是良好的師生關(guān)系的重要性，對(duì)我們，對(duì)老師有什么作用。二是培養(yǎng)良好的師生關(guān)系的方式，有哪些方法來培養(yǎng)良好的師生關(guān)系。所以重要性所占比重要少于建立師生關(guān)系的方法。主次要分明。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】我們可以借鑒文章的好的方面，一是文章的開篇點(diǎn)題，緊扣中心，就內(nèi)容而言，主次得當(dāng)。第二方面是句式變換豐富，文中使用了較復(fù)雜的句型結(jié)構(gòu)，使文章語言豐富，例如Only with good relationships can our teachers achieve the desired teaching effect, and can we do well in our studies. 倒裝句的使用以及not only---but also ----復(fù)雜的結(jié)構(gòu)。
考點(diǎn): 考查學(xué)生語言的綜合運(yùn)用能力