Question

7．下面短文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞
    增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（^），并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞．
    刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
    修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
    注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
    2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
 
Last Saturday，I went to visit the museum with my classmates．We were interesting in dinosaurs，but we came to the Dinosaur World first．There we see many fossils of different kind of dinosaurs．We were both amazed when the guide showed us some dinosaur eggs which they were laid about 9.5 million years ago．
Then we came to another hall，where many old Chinese inventions were in show．When I saw thiose old things，I felt proud of being Chinese．I think the visit very meaningfully．I should study harder to be inventor in the future and make contributions to build our great motherland．

Answer 1

分析 上個(gè)星期六，我和同學(xué)們?nèi)�參觀博物館．我們對(duì)恐龍感興趣，就先去了恐龍世界．在那看到了很多化石，當(dāng)向?qū)Ыo我們展示九百五十萬年前的恐龍蛋時(shí)，我們都驚呆了．我們還去參觀了古老的中國發(fā)明，我們都為身為中國人感到自豪．我一定努力學(xué)習(xí)，為建設(shè)我們偉大的祖國而作出自己的貢獻(xiàn)．

解答 Last Saturday，I went to visit the museum with my classmates．We were interesting in
                                                                                                            interested
dinosaurs，but we came to the Dinosaur World first．
                 so
There we see many fossils of different kind of dinosaurs．
              saw                                     kinds
We were both amazed when the guide showed us
             all
some dinosaur eggs which they were laid about 9.5 million years ago．
                                       去掉
Then we came to another hall，where many old Chinese inventions were in show．
                                                                                                         on
When I saw thiose old things，I felt proud of being Chinese．I think the visit very meaningfully．
                                                                                                                         meaningful
I should study harder to be∧inventor in the future and make contributions to build our great motherland．
                                      加an                                                                     building
1．interesting改為interested．句意表達(dá)的我們的感受，要用過去分詞．現(xiàn)在分詞表示事物的特征．
2．but改為so．句意表達(dá)的是承接，不是轉(zhuǎn)折．
3．see改為saw．文章講述的是過去的事情，要用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)．
4．kind改為kinds．句意表達(dá)的是不同類型，要用復(fù)數(shù)．
5．both改為all．句意表達(dá)的是我們所有人，要用all．both指兩個(gè)人．
6．they去掉．題干在which引導(dǎo)的是定語從句，which在從句中充當(dāng)主語，they多余．
7．in改為on．短語搭配，on show演出，展示．
8．meaningfully改為meaningful．題干中meaningful是作賓語補(bǔ)足語，要用形容詞形式．
9．加an．題干中inventor可數(shù)名詞，表示泛指，又是以元音開頭的，要用an來修飾．
10．build改為building．短語搭配，make contributions to為…做貢獻(xiàn)，to是介詞，后面要接名詞或動(dòng)名詞．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．�？嫉闹�識(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．