Question

假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三(1)班的學(xué)生李華，你校于10月8日舉行了50周年校慶活動(dòng)。作為學(xué)校英語(yǔ)報(bào)刊的一名記者，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列信息為校報(bào)寫一篇短文，報(bào)道此次活動(dòng)的主要內(nèi)容。

注意：1．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；
2．詞數(shù)不少于60。

Answer 1

On October 8th we celebrated our school’s 50th anniversary. A great number of former students and retired teachers came to the celebration.
In the morning, teachers as well as students gave a warm welcome to the guests at the school gate. After that, our headmaster gave a speech about great changes in our school these years, which greatly impressed everyone. Then some students showed the retired teachers around our beautiful campus. In the afternoon, a big party was held. We gave wonderful performances, singing and dancing. All of us enjoyed it very much. In the end, some of the guests donated some books to our school.
Through this activity, I know more about our school and we’re proud to be members of the big family.

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