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11．同學(xué)們即將進(jìn)入高三備考階段，英語老師為了提高復(fù)習(xí)效率，向?qū)W生們征集好的學(xué)習(xí)方法．假如你叫李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇短文，給出你己或者你認(rèn)為好的學(xué)習(xí)方法：
1．制定好合適的復(fù)習(xí)計(jì)劃；
2．上課認(rèn)真聽講、思考，仔細(xì)記筆記；
3．制定合理的休息時(shí)間，適當(dāng)做體育鍛煉，放松自己，對(duì)高考要有一個(gè)積極的態(tài)度，不要太緊張；
4．可以向老師尋求幫助，得到老師們的鼓勵(lì)．
注意：詞數(shù)100詞左右，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫．（考生也可適當(dāng)給出其他好的學(xué)習(xí)方法）．開頭已給出，不計(jì)詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：college entrance examination 高考；positive attitude 積極的態(tài)度；encouragement 鼓勵(lì)；proper合適的
We will enter the stage of Senior Three soon．In order to improve the learning efficiency，we had better make a proper learning plan for ourselves．Besides，to get better results，it's wise to be very careful in class and tryour best to take notes all the time in the classroom．（高分句型一）
What's more，we shoud make a suitable timetable for us to rest，do some necessary exercise every day and relax ourselves．（高分句型二）In addition，we ought to remember to stay happy and have a positive attitude so that we can be energetic while preparing for the college entrance examination．Finally，we can ask our teachers for encouragement if we need their help．
In a word，I believe we will be admitted into our ideal universities，since we have worked hard for 3 years．（高分句型三） Our efforts will pay off．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息    寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：In order to以便，為了；take notes記筆記；What's more而且；In addition另外；Finally最后；In a word總之；
Besides，to get better results，it's wise to be very careful in class and try our best to take notes all the time in the classroom．（高分句型一）
What's more，we shoud make a suitable timetable for us to rest，do some necessary exercise every day and relax ourselves．（高分句型二）
In a word，I believe we will be admitted into our ideal universities，since we have worked hard for 3 years．（高分句型三）

解答 We will enter the stage of Senior Three soon．In order to improve the learning efficiency，we had better make a proper learning plan for ourselves．Besides，to get better results，it's wise to be very careful in class and try our best to take notes all the time in the classroom．（高分句型一）
      What's more，we shoud make a suitable timetable for us to rest，do some necessary exercise every day and relax ourselves．（高分句型二）In addition，we ought to remember to stay happy and have a positive attitude so that we can be energetic while preparing for the college entrance examination．Finally，we can ask our teachers for encouragement if we need their help．
       In a word，I believe we will be admitted into our ideal universities，since we have worked hard for 3 years．（高分句型三） Our efforts will pay off．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．