假設(shè)你是李華,最近發(fā)現(xiàn)你的好友林濤經(jīng)常不參加學(xué)校組織的課間跑操活動(dòng)(the running during the break time),也很少在課外參加體育活動(dòng),根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn),用英語(yǔ)給他寫封信,交流對(duì)體育運(yùn)動(dòng)的看法。

1.發(fā)表自己的看法   2.簡(jiǎn)要說明原因    3.提供建議和幫助

注意:1.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

2.作文開頭已給,不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。詞數(shù)100--120左右。

Dear Lin Tao,

I’m sorry to find that

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Yours,

Li Hua

 

【答案】

Dear Lin Tao,

I’m sorry to find that you are often absent from the running organized by our school during the break time. And I seldom find you take any other exercise after school.

In my opinion, it is not good for you to do so. As you know, physical exercise is of great importance to our health as well as our school study. Only when we are strong and healthy can we have enough energy to learn our lessons efficiently. On the contrary, if we spend all our time on subject study, we’ll become weak for lack of exercise, which will have a bad effect on our study.

Therefore, I suggest that you should take as much exercise as you can.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析:考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。你的好友林濤經(jīng)常不參加學(xué)校組織的課間跑操活動(dòng)(the running during the break time),也很少在課外參加體育活動(dòng),根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn),用英語(yǔ)給他寫封信,交流對(duì)體育運(yùn)動(dòng)的看法。要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出,審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言,運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型,可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。象范文的Only when we are strong and healthy can we have enough energy to learn our lessons efficiently.這是倒裝句和使用了if we spend all our time on subject study, we’ll become weak for lack of exercise, which will have a bad effect on our study.非限制性定語(yǔ)從句,還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來,象On the contrary, Therefore,等詞,這樣文章顯得更連貫。

考點(diǎn):考查書信類短文寫作。

點(diǎn)評(píng):書信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括,不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序,運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文,同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。

 

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