Question

1．假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Tom一周前給你發(fā)電子郵件，詢問你暑假里的打算，但你因準(zhǔn)備期末考試未能及時(shí)回復(fù)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回封郵件：
（1）未及時(shí)回信的原因；
（2）你假期的打算（如做兼職、旅行、做志愿者等）
注意：
1．詞數(shù)：120-150；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，給美國(guó)朋友Tom寫一封郵件，對(duì)他一周前給你發(fā)電子郵件未能及時(shí)回復(fù)說明原因及告知他自己的暑假打算．
寫作時(shí)人稱以第一和第三人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)為主．
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．做家務(wù)的理由； 2．做家務(wù)的過程；3．你的感受．
重要短語：feel sorry for（收到…來信），be unable to do（不能做某事），feel sorry for（對(duì)…感到抱歉），reply one's letter （回答某人的信），in time （及時(shí)），attach great importance to…（認(rèn)為…重要），take hold of（抓�。�，focus on（集中于…），forgive sb for sth（因某人寬恕某人），ask sb for sth（向某人要某物），intend to do sth（打算做某事），work as（作為，充當(dāng)），promise sb sth（承諾某人某物），broaden one's horizon（拓寬某人的眼界），enrich one's life （豐富某人的生活），the picturesque scenery（優(yōu)美如畫的風(fēng)景），make full use of（充分利用），devote one's passion to（激情地投入），exchange sth with sb（與某人交換某事）．
【高分句型一】
1．The final exam，which all of us attached great importance to，took hold of my whole spare time．
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，主句為"The final exam took hold of my whole spare time"，關(guān)系代詞"which"在從句中作主語，指代前面整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容．
【高分句型二】
2．I had no choice but to completely focus on my study．
此處是由固定句型"I have no choice but to do sth"意為"某人別無選擇，只有做某事"．
【高分句型三】
3．I do appreciate it if you could understand and forgive me for my impoliteness．
此處是由"it"作形式賓語，"if"引導(dǎo)的從句作正在的賓語，結(jié)構(gòu)為"I appreciate/enjoy/like/love/hate+it+if/when引導(dǎo)的從句"．
【高分句型四】
3．I intend to take a part-time job working as an assistant teacher in a certain school，which I believe will promise me a good opportunity to enhance interpersonal skills，broaden our horizon and enrich our life．
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，主句為"I intend to take a part-time job working as an assistant teacher in a certain school"，關(guān)系代詞"which"在從句中作主語，指代前面整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容．

解答 Dear Tom，
How is everything going？I feel terribly sorry for being unable to reply your last letter in time．The final exam，which all of us attached great importance to，took hold of my whole spare time．【高分句型一】Therefore，I had no choice but to completely focus on my study．【高分句型二】I do appreciate it if you could understand and forgive me for my impoliteness．【高分句型三】（做家務(wù)的過程）
You asked me for my summer vacation arrangement in your last letter．Here lists my primary plan．To start with，I intend to take a part-time job working as an assistant teacher in a certain school，which I believe will promise me a good opportunity to enhance interpersonal skills，broaden our horizon and enrich our life．【高分句型四】Moreover，I consider it a golden chance to tour around China to enjoy the picturesque scenery and taste the inviting food here and there．Last but not least，being a social volunteer has long been my dream and I could make full use of the time to devote my passion to the society and help those in need during the long vacation．（做家務(wù)的過程）
Sorry indeed for having made you wait for such a long time．By the way，should you have any better plan，would you please write back to exchange ideas with me？（總結(jié)）
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours
LiHua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．