Question

一個好的學生應該具有許多優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)（如下圖所示），你認為哪個或哪兩個是最重要的呢？為什么？請分析原因，并結(jié)合自己的生活實際，寫下你的感悟。

 

 

要求：

1．詞數(shù)：120左右；

2．文中不出現(xiàn)真實的學生姓名。

注意：

1．文章連貫，條理清楚，詳略得當；

2．結(jié)合實際，寫出真情實感。

(要點一：學生應該具有哪些優(yōu)秀品質(zhì))

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Personally speaking, （要點二：你認為最重要的品質(zhì)）______________________________

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The reasons are as follows.

（要點三：原因一并結(jié)合生活實際）

To begin with, _____________________________________________________________

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（要點四：原因二并結(jié)合生活實際）

Besides, __________________________________________________________________

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From then on, I have kept the following in my minds: （要點五：感悟）_______________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Being passionate, honest and hard-working, a good student is always listening and learning. Personally speaking, I strongly believe that honesty is the most important among dozens of good qualities.

There is a proverb that goes “Honesty is the best policy”, and it seems as true as it was when first coined. The most important element in human relationships, whether business or personal, is trust.

Here is one of my secrets. I once lied to my parents because of my poor scores. Having known the real fact from teachers, they praised and encouraged me, showing their deep love. Later days, my conscience swallowed me, growing as I told lie after lie in an effort to conceal my original deceit. I gave it up, and chose to be frank. Wow! It is better to stick to the truth!

From then on, I have kept the following in my minds: If it is not true, don’t say it. If it is not right, don’t do it. Honesty is not only the best policy, but also a principle, which is absolutely essential for the good and happy living of life.

【解析】

試題分析：考查圖表和提綱式書面表達：圖表作文要仔細審題，找到主題，圍繞主題展開，還有要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，因為又是提綱類作文，本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

【亮點說明】Being passionate, honest and hard-working, a good student is always listening and learning.這句話是現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語，There is a proverb that goes “Honesty is the best policy”,這句話that引導的是賓語從句，The most important element in human relationships, whether business or personal, is trust.這句話是讓步狀語從句，Having known the real fact from teachers, they praised and encouraged me, showing their deep love.這是用了現(xiàn)在分詞的完成式做狀語，Honesty is not only the best policy, but also a principle, which is absolutely essential for the good and happy living of life.這句話是用了not only…but also….搭配。這些都是高中學生必須掌握的用法。

考點：考查圖表和提綱式書面表達