Question

5．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用 （\） 劃掉． 修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：
1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起） 不計分．
One Sunday last month I go shopping with my friends．Luckily in a crowded store，I had my wallet losing．I was such upset that I almost shouted．I was afraid to tell to my parents the truth．So I went back to school without some money．I didn't know what to do next．I didn't eat anything Monday．My roommate Mary found something wrong with me but she asked me about the pro blem．I told him the truth．Then Mary lent me some money，with that I lived through the terrible week．

Answer 1

分析 本文敘述了作者在一個星期天外出購物，因為商店的人多，不小心把自己的錢包丟了，自己回到了學校心情不好周一一天沒有吃飯，室友知道這件事后主動把錢借給了她，她度過了最艱難的一周．

解答 One Sunday last month I go shopping with my friends．Luckily in a crowded store，I had my wallet losing．I was such upset that I almost shouted．I was afraid to tell to my parents the truth．So I went back to school without some money．I didn't know what to do next．I didn't eat anything∧Monday．My roommate Mary found something wrong with me but she asked me about the pro blem．I told him the truth．Then Mary lent me some money，with that I lived through the terrible week．
詳解：
1．go改為went；考查動詞時態(tài)，根據時間狀語One Sunday last month 應該用一般過去式，故用went．
2．luckily改為Unluckily；考查副詞，分析句意應為"不幸的是商店里人多，我的錢包丟了"，根據句意可知這是不幸的事故用unluckily．
3．losing改為lost；考查固定短語．句意：我的錢包被丟了．這里是have sth lost，這里sth與lose之間是被動關系，故用lost．
4．such改為so； 考查固定結構，這是"so+形容詞+that"或"such+a/an+形容詞+名詞+that"結構，句中that前面是形容詞upset，故用so．
5．去掉to； 考查動詞，此處tell是及物動詞，后面可直接跟賓語，故去掉to．
6．some改為any；考查代詞，some用于肯定句，any用于否定句和疑問句，分析句意為"因此我回到學校時，身上沒有錢了"，這是一個否定句，故用any．
7．Monday前面加on；考查介詞，表示時間具體到某一天時前面要用介詞on．
8．but改為and；考查連詞，分析句意為"我的室友發(fā)現了我有了麻煩并且問我她問我出了什么問題"，根據句意此處應該用and表示并列．
9．him改為her；考查人稱代詞，這里上文已經有she asked me about the problem 代詞應該上下文一致，故用her．
10．that改為which；考查定語從句，這是一個定語從句，先行詞是some money，關系詞在從句中做賓語，用于介詞之后，只能用which．

點評 短文改錯時要先了解文章的中心思想，根據短文大意確定基本時態(tài)，然后詳細閱讀短文，分析句式結構和句群關系，再運用所掌握的語法，詞匯，固定短語等基礎知識找出短文中的錯誤加以改正．