Question

假如你叫李華，是一位高中學(xué)生。請(qǐng)你用英語給某報(bào)社寫一封信，反映如下情況和你的想法：

　　1. 教室是學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)的地方，需要安靜。

　　2. 有些學(xué)生把手機(jī)帶進(jìn)教室，在課堂上經(jīng)常聽見手機(jī)的鈴聲。

　　3. 有的同學(xué)還在課堂上發(fā)短信息，浪費(fèi)寶貴的學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間。

　　4. 建議有手機(jī)的同學(xué)上課時(shí)應(yīng)把手機(jī)關(guān)掉，不要接聽電話或發(fā)短信息，集中注意力學(xué)習(xí)。

注意：1. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2. 詞數(shù): 100左右；

Dear Editor,

I’m a senior high student

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I'm a senior high student. In my opinion, the classroom is a place for students to gain knowledge. Therefore quietness is badly needed for us to learn our lessons. But recently some students bring their mobile phones to the classroom and we often hear the ring of mobile phones. Some of them even waste precious time in class typing short messages on the mobile phone.

To keep the classroom quiet, those with mobile phones should not talk on the phone or send short messages. They should turn them off. We are supposed to concentrate on our studies.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。同時(shí)也屬于提綱類作文，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要點(diǎn)時(shí)以時(shí)間為順序，運(yùn)用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用省略句，倒裝句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句型準(zhǔn)確表述。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類短文寫作。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，本文以時(shí)間為序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。