Question

In junior high school, one of my classmates, Ethan, was addicted to TV. This boy simply knew everything about such pop shows as Who’s the Boss?

    Then one day Ethan’s mother made an offer in order to draw him back to his school subjects. She promised that she would give him $200 if he could go a full month without watching any TV. None of us thought Ethan could do it, but he did quite well. His mom paid him $200. He went out and bought a TV, the biggest he could find.

    In recent years, hundreds of schools have carried out experiments with paying kids with each for showing up or getting good grades. All school kids admire this trend. But it upsets adults. Teachers say that we are rewarding kids for doing what they should be doing of their own will. Psychologists warn that money can actually make kids perform worse by making the act of learning cheap. The debate has become a typical battle over why our kids are not learning at the rate they should he despite decades of reforms and budget increases.

[寫作內(nèi)容] 1. 以約30詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。

2. 以約120詞對用金錢鼓勵孩子學(xué)習(xí)的現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行議論，內(nèi)容包括：

(1)你對用金錢鼓勵孩子學(xué)習(xí)的看法;

(2)你的父母(或其他親人)是如何鼓勵你學(xué)習(xí)的；

(3)你認(rèn)為怎樣才能更好地鼓勵孩子學(xué)習(xí)。

[寫作要求]

1. 可以使用實(shí)例或其它論述方法支持你的論點(diǎn)，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2. 標(biāo)題自定。

3. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

【讀寫任務(wù)優(yōu)秀范文選登1】

   What should people really do encourage their kids to concentrate their time and energy on studying lessons and doing well? People’s opinions differ from each other about this problem.

   Some schools, teachers and parents give their students or kids money as a stimulating means in order to encourage them to do what they should do effectively, this phenomenon is common in recent years and it is welcome by most of the young. I don’t think it is an effective way, on the contrary it may lead to the opposite result.

   My parents and family often tell me some encouraging stories in ancient or modern times such as Li Bai, Zhou Enlai and so on. Each time I make a little progress in my study, they always praise me with open arms, and whenever I am confronted with difficulties my family always stand my side. I feel comfortable and warm in my heart for what they do for me. I make up my mind that I’ll live up to my family and my homeland.

   I think, as a student myself, school and parents should educate their kids through teaching them to study for their family and their motherland rather than giving them money to letr them passively do something. Only by building up some noble and long-range aims can they study on their own initiative.

【讀寫任務(wù)優(yōu)秀范文選登2】

【解析】略