假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Last Sunday I witness a traffic accident on my way home. I was wandering down the sidewalk while there went loud crash. Two taxis crashed into each other about ten meters far away. I went up and found the two drivers bad injured, bleeding and trap in the taxis. Luckily, they were rescued on time because people came to help them and called an ambulance. As was clear that the taxi drivers were so eager to take more passengers that they drove too fast. It reflected their lack of concern for the safe of both others and them.


【小題1】Witness改成witnessed
【小題2】while改成when
【小題3】went前面加a
【小題4】去掉far
【小題5】bad改成badly
【小題6】trap改成trapped
【小題7】on 改成in
【小題8】As改成it
【小題9】safe改成safety
【小題10】them.改成themselves

解析試題分析：文章介紹作者在上星期天在回家路上見到的一場交通事故，兩輛車相撞，司機(jī)受傷很嚴(yán)重，幸運(yùn)的是他們及時被送到醫(yī)院，作者呼吁要關(guān)注人身安全。
【小題1】時間是Last Sunday，Witness用過去時，改成witnessed
【小題2】while引導(dǎo)時間狀語，表示“一段時間”，when 是“這時”，表示“時間點(diǎn)”，句意：我正在路上走，這時聽見一聲撞擊聲。
【小題3】a loud crash泛指“一聲很響的撞擊聲”
【小題4】ten meters away.是“距離有10米遠(yuǎn)”，去掉多余的far
【小題5】修飾形容詞injured 應(yīng)該用副詞：badly
【小題6】two drivers 和trap是被動關(guān)系，用過去分詞做狀語trapped
【小題7】on time“準(zhǔn)時”， in time及時，句意：幸運(yùn)的是他們被及時救了。
【小題8】As引導(dǎo)的是非限制性定語從句，這句話明顯不是： it is clear that...很明顯...,it是形式主語，
【小題9】句意：這表明他們?nèi)狈ψ钭约汉蛣e人安全的關(guān)心。用名詞safety
【小題10】用themselves指代 the taxi drivers
考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯

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