Question

書面表達（30分）
目前，許多學校存在部分學生抄襲作業(yè)的現(xiàn)象�，F(xiàn)在就這個話題大家談談自己的看法。標題是“My opinion on copying others’ homework”
內容要點如下：

主要 原因	作業(yè)量大，偏難	個人 看法	抄襲不對，違反校規(guī)
	對功課不感興趣，懶惰		要誠實，勤奮學習
	完成任務，取悅老師		有困難可請教老師和同學

注意：1 短文必須包括所有內容和要點，可適當發(fā)揮；
2 短文和標題已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；
3 詞數(shù)：90左右
My opinion on copying others’ homework
It’s known to us all that some students copy others’ homework.____________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

It is known to us all that some students copy others’ homework. As a student, we have to do plenty homework both at school and at home, but sometimes we have too much homework which is too difficult for us .On the other hand, some students are lazy, and are not interested in their lessons, nor do they work hard. So in order to finish the assignments and please their teachers, some students copy others’ home.
In my opinion, it is wrong to copy others’ homework because it breaks the rules of the school. We should be honest and try to finish our homework by ourselves instead of by copying .If you have trouble doing your homework, you can ask your teachers and classmates for help.

解析試題分析：這是一篇典型的議論文體的寫作，它以表格的形式提出了論點（抄襲作業(yè)的原因）和論據(jù)，同時需要考生自由發(fā)揮的部分（你的看法），也就是就此發(fā)表個人的見解。本文的重點是表格中兩種方式的優(yōu)，缺點，根據(jù)題目的特點，以三段式的形式來寫作比較好。
根據(jù)內容，它是就一般的抄襲作業(yè)對與錯而進行的討論，沒有特定的時間界定，因而考生應以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時為主。相當一部分考生用一般過去時進行論述，這會失掉較多的分數(shù)。從題目所給的開頭可知應用第一人稱來寫。
考點:考查議論文寫作 
點評：本文題型是考生分詞熟悉的正反觀點類的議論文，在平時的練習中也有相應的模板。審題時注 意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱以第三人稱為主，發(fā)表個人意見時使用第一人稱。本文的要點均已給出，考生需要使用合適的連接詞把孤立的要點聯(lián)系成文。如for one thing, for another; besides, firstly, secondly, last but not least等。也要使用一些高級的詞匯詞組如 be supposed to do sth, benefit 等以提升文章的檔次分。在文章紅可以適當使用一至兩句諺語如：Every coin has two sides等可以大大提高文章的文采，提高獲得高分的可能性。