Question

假設(shè)你是某健康雜志的醫(yī)學(xué)顧問Dr White，一名叫李明的中學(xué)生來信說，他所在班級近視的學(xué)生超過總數(shù)的一半，而且大多數(shù)學(xué)生的視力越來越差，她感到非常擔(dān)心。請你針對她所說的情況，結(jié)合下面要點(diǎn)，用英語給李華回信，告訴她應(yīng)該如何保護(hù)視力。

堅(jiān)持做眼保健操

定期做視力檢查

臥床或乘車時(shí)不要看書

不要用手揉眼睛

如無必要，不要戴有色眼鏡。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)：100左右；

2．適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫；

3．開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Li Ming,

You’re very kind to care about your classmates.                                     

____________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Dr. White

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Ming,

You’re very kind to care about your classmates. It is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. Now I will give you some advice on how to protect your eyesight.

To begin with, don't keep your eyes working for a long time. You'd better have a rest by looking in the long distance after you have studied an hour or so.

Then, pay attention to the following: Don't read in the sun or in a poor light; don't read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot.

Furthermore, do eye-exercises every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight.

And finally, you’d better not rub your eyes with your hands; and it is bad for your eyesight if you wear colored glasses.

I hope my advice will be helpful to you and your classmates.

【解析】

試題分析：提綱作文要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語言來表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達(dá)能力。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。