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2．此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤．對(duì)標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每一行作出判斷：如無錯(cuò)誤，則在該行右邊橫線上畫出一個(gè)勾（√）；如有錯(cuò)誤（每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤），則按下列情況改正：
此行多一個(gè)詞：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉，在此行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉；
此行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），在此行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞；
該行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞．
注意：原行沒有錯(cuò)的不要改．
    Last summer our family went to Yellow Stone Park for                 （76）
a vacation．When we got there，we put up our tent and go to           （77）
explore．As we returned，we saw a bear enter into our tent．           （78）
My daughter Susie wanted to chase him away and my husband           （79）
said，"No，that is dangerous to chase a bear．""Maybe we could       （80）
make him left if we put some honey outside for him to eat．"Susie      （81）
suggested．I said，"Why are you going to get the honey？It's in         （82）
the tents．"We could hear clearly the bear upset everything inside．    （83）
We waited for so a long time that in the end we had no choice              （84）
but to sleep in the car．What experience it was!（85）．

Answer 1

分析 短文講述了作者一家去年夏天去黃石公園度假的經(jīng)歷，他們搭好的帳篷里鉆進(jìn)了一只
熊，他們沒有辦法把熊趕出來，最后只能睡在了車?yán)铮?/p>

解答 Last summer our family went to Yellow Stone Park for                              （76）√
a vacation．When we got there，we put up our tent and go to                   （77）went
explore．As we returned，we saw a bear enter into our tent．                   （78）去掉into
My daughter Susie wanted to chase him away and my husband                   （79）but
said，"No，that is dangerous to chase a bear．""Maybe we could               （80）it
make him left if we put some honey outside for him to eat．"Susie             （81）leave
suggested．I said，"Why are you going to get the honey？It's in                （82）where
the tents．"We could hear clearly the bear upset everything inside．          （83）tent
We waited for so a long time that in the end we had no choice                    （84）such
but to sleep in the car．What∧experience it was!（85）an
76．該行沒有錯(cuò)誤．
77．go改為went；考查時(shí)態(tài)，短文講的是去年夏天的事情，要用過去時(shí)．
78．去掉into；考查介詞，enter本身就是"進(jìn)入，到…里面"的意思，再加上into就重復(fù)了．
79．a(chǎn)nd改為but；考查連詞，根據(jù)句意這里前后句是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，所以用but．
80．that改為it；考查句式結(jié)構(gòu)，這里是固定句型"it is+形容詞+（for sb）+to do"．
81．left改為leave；考查動(dòng)詞不定式，這里make用作使役動(dòng)詞，后跟省to不定式．
82．why改為where；考查疑問詞，根據(jù)語境，這句意思應(yīng)該是"你到哪里去弄蜂蜜呢"，故用where．
83．tents改為tent；考查名詞，結(jié)合上下文，這里特指"我們"的那個(gè)帳篷，所以用單數(shù)．
84．so改為such；考查詞匯，so是副詞，后跟形容詞或副詞；such是形容詞，后跟名詞，這里修飾的是
    名詞詞組a long time，所以用such．
85．experience前面加an；考查名詞，experience作為"經(jīng)歷"講是可數(shù)名詞，又以元音音素開頭，所以前面加a．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)是要先通讀全文，整體把握短文意思，然后進(jìn)一步詳細(xì)分析句式結(jié)構(gòu)和句子成分，再運(yùn)用所掌握
的基本語言知識(shí)找 出文中錯(cuò)誤，加以修改．