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第三節(jié)：書面表達(dá)（30分）
你作為慈溪的一名高中學(xué)生，到慈溪的時(shí)代電影院看了一場精彩的電影，但在觀影過程中發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些問題。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提示用英語給影院經(jīng)理寫一封信。
1. 電影票價(jià)過高，中學(xué)生難以承受;
2．因廣告過多，影片放映晚點(diǎn)；
3．影片播放聲音過大；
4．安全出口標(biāo)識(shí)不明，存在安全隱患；
5．適當(dāng)結(jié)尾。
注意：1．詞數(shù)：80—120；
2．可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．信的開頭以為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。
4．參考詞匯：安全出口 exit
安全隱患 potential safety hazard
Dear Manager,
I am a high school student in Cixi. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very good, but …
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Dear Manager,
I am a high school student in Cixi. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very good, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problems in the cinema。
First ，the prices of the tickets are really too high for us students to afford 。second ，the film was delayed as there so many advertisement at the beginning。It was rather annoying。Third ，the sound of the film was so loud that I could hardly hear it 。what’s more ，the EXIT signs could not be seen clearly ，which presented potential safety hazards 。if something terrible should happen，it would be difficult for people to get out quickly。
As a student in our city，I am very disappointed with my experience in your cinema。I am writing the letter in the hope that you can consider these problems and make improvements。
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua

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