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書面表達(dá)（滿分15分）
最近，校園安全成為人們廣泛關(guān)注的話題，為確保師生安全，你校決定禁止外人進(jìn)入校園。為此，學(xué)校在學(xué)生中做了一次“家長(zhǎng)該不該進(jìn)校園及其原因”的調(diào)查。調(diào)查結(jié)果如下圖所示：

根據(jù)上圖信息，請(qǐng)以“Should parents be banned from entering campus?”為題，用英語寫一篇100-120個(gè)詞的短文。要求如下：
1. 簡(jiǎn)要描述圖中的信息（包括人數(shù)比率、觀點(diǎn)及原因）；2. 談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br />注意：文章的標(biāo)題和開頭已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。
Should parents be banned from entering campus?
Recently, campus security has become a hot issue. To ensure security, strangers are banned from entering campus by our school, and a survey has been made among the students about whether parents should be included.
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Should parents be banned from entering campus?
Recently, campus security has become a hot issue. To ensure security, strangers are banned from entering campus by our school, and a survey has been made among the students about whether parents should be included.
According to the survey, 60℅ of the students think parents should be included because it is a rule everyone should obey. Another 25℅ subscribe to the view that there is no need for the ban as their beloved parents couldn’t be a danger to anyone. However, the rest think the guards can make a proper decision depending on certain situations.
Personally, I agree with the first. As the saying goes, to forestall is better than to amend. Proper measures should be taken before it’s too late. As for parents, they have some other ways to keep in touch with their children, like making calls or asking for teachers’ help. All in all, campus security calls for everyone’s concern and cooperation.

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