Question

假設(shè)你是李華，是某校高一新生。來到新的學(xué)校后，你要給父母寫一封100字左右的英文信，向父母說明這里的情況。內(nèi)容如下：

1.你的學(xué)校是一所歷史悠久的名校，校園環(huán)境優(yōu)美，教師經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富，教室寬敞明亮，教學(xué)設(shè)備（teaching equipment）先進(jìn)，圖書館有大量的藏書。你對(duì)這一切都很滿意。

2.自己已經(jīng)養(yǎng)成了晨練的習(xí)慣。

注意1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.信件格式已為你給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3.請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡上作答。

Dear parents,

I am very happy to study in my new beautiful school, which is famous and has a long history.  ...   ....

Best wishes!

Yours truly,

LiHua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear parents,

I am very happy to study in my new beautiful school, which is famous and has a long history. We have many experienced teachers who are kind and easy-going. There are many bright classrooms with a lot of advanced teaching equipment. In the school library, there are a large number of books we can borrow.

By the way, I have developed the habit of morning exercise. I get up at 6:30 every morning, and do morning exercise on the playground till 7:00.So please don’t worry about me.

How is everything going with both of you? Miss you very much and look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best wishes!

Yours truly,

LiHua

【解析】

試題分析：提綱作文要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語言來表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達(dá)能力。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。